Don't read this. The grammar here is very bad. The author sometimes confuses their and there, uses u instead of you, doesn't capitalize proper nouns, and many more. Not only that, but the personality of the MC is one-dimensional. He is just a cold person whose goal is still not shown which makes me think of a fourteen-year-old edge lord. The MC wants to create another realm besides Asgard but there is no real reason. Beating Odin in the fight for the throne is easier. Now let me talk about the harem. In the poll of the Author, the MC's harem will consist of Wanda, Death, Hela, Gaea, and black widow. That's so messed up and illogical. Three of the people I mentioned don't even exist yet and the MC is thousands of years older than them. Not to mention, Hela is the daughter of his younger brother so that is messed up. And the idea that prideful beings such as Hela, Death, and Gaea will accept black widow in the harem and being in a harem, in general, is illogical. They won't accept being in a harem with a mortal woman whose only strong point is spying. I was originally going to give it two stars but decided to give it one to balance the people who gave five stars for a trash novel like this.
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