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Yamata_no_OrochiLv42yr
2022-04-04 14:00

All in all not really a mature idea of ​​how the MC behaves and everything around it. It appears as if the author has little knowledge of Marvel (comics, cartoons and movies) as well as how thinking, feeling and living people/beings behave. The story could have real potential if the author tries to make his characters seem more alive. It would also help if the MC doesn't think like every other MC of a fanfic that he is above everything and everyone with his opinion and belief and so on.

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