Item: Enjoying life in twilight
Rating: 2.2
Author: StarWriting

StarWritingLv102yr

2022-01-23 05:08

Honestly dude…you kinda blew it with this story. Some chapters were alright, but others have just been completely cringe. And when your MC just decided to turn into a xiancia murder hobo this story was honestly over at that point…there’s not really any way to redeem it.

Enjoying life in twilight

DarknessAuthor

3.8

93 Chs

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LAZY WRITING... Just type 'YOU' instead of 'U' Why are u using u, u dirty mongrel! Just use Grammarly... Or anything really, just make an attempt...

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