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OverwritLv33yr
2021-12-30 04:27

To be honest, the story was a total disappointment. It started off ok, nothing really special, but it was ok, the bad thing is the most pathetic and forced romance I've ever seen, and over all crepuscle cliche, the MC just comes into the world, tries his powers and bonds with the blonde girl, by force and the MC didn't even care, the bond comes and the MC says he wants to get away, he wants freedom, so he was doing his own thing for a year, then comes the problems that the blonde's family has problems and the MC feels that, blah blah, in the end the MC saves her and falls totally in love with her because of the bond, which ironically makes him a slave to love and the bond, really disappointing, mostly because it seems that no one who does crepusculo fanfic tries to do something new or different, it's all bonding, bonding, and more bonding.

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jack_frost_9942
jack_frost_9942Lv14

yea I feel the same he became a slave

JokesOnYou
JokesOnYouLv3

The MC already decided he was going to go to his bond and just waited to do so. His character didn’t change it just adapted it’s not like his simping for his mate and what do you actually expect him to do. He already had feelings for her plus it’s not like his mate doesn’t give in the relationship either. It’s still early on as well so I don’t think calling him a slave based on a couple choices is logical. In the end it’s all about what type of novel your looking for, this just isn’t for you. 👍👍👍

dinhoAMV
dinhoAMVLv2

Faça melhor, Porque falar é fácil ou escrever

Porya_Nasiri
Porya_NasiriLv4

i love how nobody liked this comment🤣👍

JokesOnYou:The MC already decided he was going to go to his bond and just waited to do so. His character didn’t change it just adapted it’s not like his simping for his mate and what do you actually expect him to do. He already had feelings for her plus it’s not like his mate doesn’t give in the relationship either. It’s still early on as well so I don’t think calling him a slave based on a couple choices is logical. In the end it’s all about what type of novel your looking for, this just isn’t for you. 👍👍👍
DURJOY_Barua
DURJOY_BaruaLv1

but now somebody did🤧

Porya_Nasiri:i love how nobody liked this comment🤣👍
Primordial_Saiyan
Primordial_SaiyanLv4

DURJOY_Barua:but now somebody did🤧
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LewdSenPai
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Primordial_Saiyan:
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

women love this stuff

InternetSaintBF
InternetSaintBFLv1

*14 year old girls

InternetSaint:women love this stuff
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Women never grow up.

InternetSaintBF:*14 year old girls
InternetSaintBF
InternetSaintBFLv1

😭

InternetSaint:Women never grow up.
VolkBert
VolkBertLv14

Esse argumento não tem sentido, vc ja percebeu? vc quer dizer que eu preciso ser um bom politico pra criticar politica? preciso ser um bom escritor pra criticar um livro? preciso ser um bom cozinheiro pra criticar comida, abre a poha dos seus olhos e pensa na merda que vc fala pf!

dinhoAMV:Faça melhor, Porque falar é fácil ou escrever
dinhoAMV
dinhoAMVLv2

eu já escrevi história e sei que como é difícil então no lugar de falar merda aprenda antes

VolkBert:Esse argumento não tem sentido, vc ja percebeu? vc quer dizer que eu preciso ser um bom politico pra criticar politica? preciso ser um bom escritor pra criticar um livro? preciso ser um bom cozinheiro pra criticar comida, abre a poha dos seus olhos e pensa na merda que vc fala pf!
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