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CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv133yr
2021-12-24 15:57

Is like reading a third rate Chinese cliché novel,full of errors and bad grammar!! first time i saw a author use "u" and not "you"! . .

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DarknessAuthor
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93 Chs

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soldklad
soldkladLv5

maybe, he is writing in his phone?

3yr
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MrSleepyAsh98ij3g
MrSleepyAsh98ij3gLv2

I am also writing on my phone.... Lets have a moment of silence for those who have no laptop... We have one but, Me and my 2 brothers shared it and the computer is always used by my dad...

soldklad:maybe, he is writing in his phone?
3yr
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rolas
rolasLv14

do phones not have the letters y and o programmed in them?

soldklad:maybe, he is writing in his phone?
2yr
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soldklad
soldkladLv5

no, the reason is about not tapping the key correctly or the screen key was not 'tapped' at all then if the keyboard autocorrect system got used to this, it will then automatically use this as reference it will be really bad by then

rolas:do phones not have the letters y and o programmed in them?
2yr
TempestasUmbra
TempestasUmbraLv15

You can change the autocorrect settings, you know that right?

soldklad:no, the reason is about not tapping the key correctly or the screen key was not 'tapped' at all then if the keyboard autocorrect system got used to this, it will then automatically use this as reference it will be really bad by then
2yr
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soldklad
soldkladLv5

yeah, it's just, sometimes people forget that it can be done lol

TempestasUmbra:You can change the autocorrect settings, you know that right?
2yr
Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4

Yeah writing your story on your phone sucks

MrSleepyAsh98ij3g:I am also writing on my phone.... Lets have a moment of silence for those who have no laptop... We have one but, Me and my 2 brothers shared it and the computer is always used by my dad...
1yr
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Overwrit
OverwritLv3

To be honest, the story was a total disappointment. It started off ok, nothing really special, but it was ok, the bad thing is the most pathetic and forced romance I've ever seen, and over all crepuscle cliche, the MC just comes into the world, tries his powers and bonds with the blonde girl, by force and the MC didn't even care, the bond comes and the MC says he wants to get away, he wants freedom, so he was doing his own thing for a year, then comes the problems that the blonde's family has problems and the MC feels that, blah blah, in the end the MC saves her and falls totally in love with her because of the bond, which ironically makes him a slave to love and the bond, really disappointing, mostly because it seems that no one who does crepusculo fanfic tries to do something new or different, it's all bonding, bonding, and more bonding.

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PinnacleExistence
PinnacleExistenceLv14

Reveal spoiler

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StarWriting
StarWritingLv10

Honestly dude…you kinda blew it with this story. Some chapters were alright, but others have just been completely cringe. And when your MC just decided to turn into a xiancia murder hobo this story was honestly over at that point…there’s not really any way to redeem it.

3yr
DarknessAuthor
DarknessAuthorAuthor

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bondarant
bondarantLv2

I think the author wanted to give the story some spice a plot twist to entertain the readers and failed miserably He is hostile against the cullens for petty reasons like them favoring edward another (it's nunya business why do you care?) The forced romance and bonding, bonding. And even more bonding This is a hot piece of garbage that you can read if you are bored to death

2yr
NullElement
NullElementLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Victortoery12
Victortoery12Lv2

LAZY WRITING... Just type 'YOU' instead of 'U' Why are u using u, u dirty mongrel! Just use Grammarly... Or anything really, just make an attempt...

2yr
Sumeet_K
Sumeet_KLv4

Trying to balance the spam reviews. This is not a good story anyway,........ nope cringe. so much cringe. .

2yr
valient_vicky
valient_vickyLv2

Why can't they be creative? Just the same plot of bind and everything. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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