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Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv53yr
2022-01-11 11:35

A bit of an updated review from me on this novel, if you are into football or soccer (For Americans) this is absolutely is the book for you. Each chapter is always interesting, although it is a bit fast pace the MC can still lose as football is a sport where anything can happen. The stability of this update is alright, you don't get a chapter every day but once you do, you will get at least 3 chapters or more a day. Considering this is translated from Indonesian from the author itself is really impressive, as the grammar is actually not that bad. The world background is also just like our world, but with OC's, for example, the character of Matheo is actually Messi in real life, but instead, he plays for Juventus, and then with Quaresma who is supposed to be Cristiano Ronaldo, and he plays for Real Madrid. There is romance in this, but it is a slow romance. Then for character designs, there aren't really any specifics on how the character really looks, but that just allows me to use my imagination of what our MC looks like. Then for story development, it really shows the football world as a whole and it dives into things such as transfer and etc. Other than that, this is a gem of a novel, and I think people should review this a bit more.

Dream Training : The Champions

Agis_Z99
4.1
227 Chs

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Agis_Z99
Agis_Z99Author

It was my first English novel, so there would be a lot of flaws in it. If you think this novel readable then please continue, but if you think the English in the novel is too bad to interrupt your reading pleasure, then stop reading. English is not my mother tongue, but one of the ways to improve English is to keep writing and reading. Because it's hard for me to improve English if I have to stop writing this novel. The background of this novel is an alternate reality with references of players from the real world. I apologize if there any fan of a club or a player was offended by my writing.

3yr

Lidi
LidiLv5

good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers

2yr
Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv5

I finally found a gem, thank you for making this author. If you feature blue lock or something into this I would be a very happy man. But overall I really like this book and it is one of those hidden gems in we novel.

3yr
KenYotsuba
KenYotsubaLv1

I recommend this novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
DogMomDadBroSis
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Riq13
Riq13Lv1

Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!!!

3yr
KalEl
KalElLv11

Why has Kazuki become so bad at forgetting goals in recent chapters? And only assists gives! I'm reading about Kazuki, not other players! Kazuki needs to be the best and not the average player!!!!!

2yr
Pillpoppa_13
Pillpoppa_13Lv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
edgy
edgyLv14

Its not bad.... I kept reading on to know if the mc will be the main but nop... u don't focus in mc at all 😕..sorry my english is bad I hope u can understand this !!!!! I request the author to look read The greatest of all time...I swear it's the best novel..

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