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Agis_Z99
Agis_Z99Author3yr
2021-11-24 14:59

It was my first English novel, so there would be a lot of flaws in it. If you think this novel readable then please continue, but if you think the English in the novel is too bad to interrupt your reading pleasure, then stop reading. English is not my mother tongue, but one of the ways to improve English is to keep writing and reading. Because it's hard for me to improve English if I have to stop writing this novel. The background of this novel is an alternate reality with references of players from the real world. I apologize if there any fan of a club or a player was offended by my writing.

Dream Training : The Champions

Agis_Z99
4.1
227 Chs

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Lxpsy
LxpsyLv15

Hey, will there be romance cause u got a girl on the cover ? Or will our Mc be a transgender ?

2yr
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Agis_Z99
Agis_Z99Author

There will be a romance but it's a very smooth romance rather than a dramatic one. about the cover, I'm just too lazy to make a good one. maybe I will change it in the future

Lxpsy:Hey, will there be romance cause u got a girl on the cover ? Or will our Mc be a transgender ?
2yr
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Tianlong31
Tianlong31Lv4

I just Finished reading the novel i found that story is so outstanding and unique. I m not a native english speaker, i found that ur english writing is so Good. Please, just change the cover and please please continue don’t stop updating the novel don’t drop. Waiting for more update. Thanks for this masterpiece🔥

2yr
Hein_Sat
Hein_SatLv4

I love reading Football Novel but I am only proficient in Eng so my options are of limited.And the only translated one are China Ones which make MCs lead their China Team to WC Glory and I always LoLed at this part.😂😂I mean they still can't even qualify for WC.And this one is a good part from U as I thought this is sensual.

2yr
Lord_Aizel_eldrago
Lord_Aizel_eldragoLv14

you should try the greatest of all time it's epic

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LeFraud_James23
LeFraud_James23Lv3

Author-san, I love the idea. I don't have a problem with orthographic, but I think the story is too fast and shallow. You focus too much one that it isn't important for the story (like half a chapter for a match that didn't have anything to do with MC). There's much potential in what you wanted to do, I just feel it needs more development, more world building.

2yr
Sydney_Q
Sydney_QLv1

I love your work but it would be ver nice if you put more storylines it will make the book even better. I really enjoyed reading this book

2yr
reqrwq2
reqrwq2Lv3

Why did you have to add have feature of improving 5 player with MC, author? I dropped the novel after that stupid stunt. If system has such crazy power to improve skill of a player like video game why it don't use it on MC? Half of what MC improve by training in dreaming just automatically adds to 5 player... Why not it adds it to the MC instead of distributing? Stupid trash idea.

2yr
SleepingForestKing
SleepingForestKingLv4

ON chapter 96 and it’s getting kinda stale & repetitive… tbh you can skip to the end of a match and realize what happened, theirs no flare or sparkle in the games anymore he isnt leveling its just match after match after match and he doesnt have any stars so I cant imagine his squad full of youths winning the league this year neef some major changes

2yr
Juto
JutoLv14

I particularly love sports novel, and thank you for picking one up as there is very few on this platform. I do not mind your writing quality, as I have read worse on this platform, so please do not give up.

2yr
MediocreSkater
MediocreSkaterLv13

I'm really happy for a romance with no drama, as long as it's fluffy and sweet and doesn't interfere tok much with the main plot it sounds grea

Agis_Z99:There will be a romance but it's a very smooth romance rather than a dramatic one. about the cover, I'm just too lazy to make a good one. maybe I will change it in the future
2yr
David_Adetola
David_AdetolaLv4

Oo do u have any other one like this

Hein_Sat:I love reading Football Novel but I am only proficient in Eng so my options are of limited.And the only translated one are China Ones which make MCs lead their China Team to WC Glory and I always LoLed at this part.😂😂I mean they still can't even qualify for WC.And this one is a good part from U as I thought this is sensual.
2yr
Other Reviews
Lidi
LidiLv5

good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers

2yr

Truth_Only_Reader
Truth_Only_ReaderLv5

I finally found a gem, thank you for making this author. If you feature blue lock or something into this I would be a very happy man. But overall I really like this book and it is one of those hidden gems in we novel.

2yr
KenYotsuba
KenYotsubaLv1

I recommend this novel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
DogMomDadBroSis
DogMomDadBroSisLv4

😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁Love it mate😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

3yr
Reader1112
Reader1112Lv4

h . hghhhhhhh . h h .. . . . .. .. . .

3yr
Riq13
Riq13Lv1

Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!!!

3yr
KalEl
KalElLv11

Why has Kazuki become so bad at forgetting goals in recent chapters? And only assists gives! I'm reading about Kazuki, not other players! Kazuki needs to be the best and not the average player!!!!!

2yr
Pillpoppa_13
Pillpoppa_13Lv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
edgy
edgyLv14

Its not bad.... I kept reading on to know if the mc will be the main but nop... u don't focus in mc at all 😕..sorry my english is bad I hope u can understand this !!!!! I request the author to look read The greatest of all time...I swear it's the best novel..

2yr
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