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Sin_of_GREEDLv142yr
2022-05-03 16:33

well compared to most trail novels this quite good but it doesn't deserve the hype readers are spreading just because it's from tlm's writer it's a copy of fantasy simulator so i would compare it with that only(compared general novels it's still quite good) it's subpar compared to fantasy simulator it's more of watered down version of fantasy simulator as the Original work had many points which made more engaging which this lacks most importantly it was imeressive while astral apostle isn't as Astral apostle make it feel like mc is in VRrpg rather than a real world far away

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DemonizedDemonLv5

I prefer astral apostle. Although, fantasy simulator is not bad, the unlimited time restriction in the beginning took away much of his developmental phase. It doesn't feel as nice when reading. I also feel that that part, before he traveled to a new world was somewhat rushed too quickly. In astral apostle, there is a set time exchange between the two worlds and is not a complete time stop. Additionally, the functions of astral apostle is explained very clearly (although detailed), and invests much more into one world, unlike the various pick and choose worlds in fantasy simulator.

Sin_of_GREEDLv14

i don't agree with you not one bit except that the System Mechanics is quite detailed as i said this work is nothing but a 100% VR rpg(remember rpg not mmorpg) with followers missions idle functions etc second u say in fantasy simulator one could pick and choose the worlds to answer that nope it's random mc had to consume a lot of points for his system to find a new world at random after finding it's co-ordinates he could go and reincarnate in the new world or go to any older worlds which is great unlike in Astral sh it which is very restricted again same as some RPGs where u can't explore new places unless u clear the stage first again only thing somewhat good in this one is that the mechanics are neatly defined at that too there's a mistake in a chapter,the spending of points is wrong it's 275 points instead of 305 P S i won't take langauge in consideration as fantasy simulator is MTL while this has editor +a team of translators

DemonizedDemon:I prefer astral apostle. Although, fantasy simulator is not bad, the unlimited time restriction in the beginning took away much of his developmental phase. It doesn't feel as nice when reading. I also feel that that part, before he traveled to a new world was somewhat rushed too quickly. In astral apostle, there is a set time exchange between the two worlds and is not a complete time stop. Additionally, the functions of astral apostle is explained very clearly (although detailed), and invests much more into one world, unlike the various pick and choose worlds in fantasy simulator.
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

u this one is detailed the do give explanation why is the writer writing BS about his agility talent which somehow gives the perks which have nothing to do with agility 🤣😂🤣

DemonizedDemon:I prefer astral apostle. Although, fantasy simulator is not bad, the unlimited time restriction in the beginning took away much of his developmental phase. It doesn't feel as nice when reading. I also feel that that part, before he traveled to a new world was somewhat rushed too quickly. In astral apostle, there is a set time exchange between the two worlds and is not a complete time stop. Additionally, the functions of astral apostle is explained very clearly (although detailed), and invests much more into one world, unlike the various pick and choose worlds in fantasy simulator.
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Lol, at least it is the novel from this batch. I personaly like this one more over fantasy simulator. That novel got boring real quick.

Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Best novel from this batch*

Black_lotus_2004:Lol, at least it is the novel from this batch. I personaly like this one more over fantasy simulator. That novel got boring real quick.
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

oh here it comes the fan of TLM dude stop with the promotion gig it's looks like ur paid to do this p s would write new chapters for ur novel or that's dropped?

Black_lotus_2004:Lol, at least it is the novel from this batch. I personaly like this one more over fantasy simulator. That novel got boring real quick.
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

this definitely true

Black_lotus_2004:Best novel from this batch*
Black_lotus_2004Lv14

Nah, I don't plan on dropping. I am just preoccupied a bit and don't have time to write my stories right now. I will be free after the end of this month so by the next month I will sign the Webnovel contract and become active.😤

Sin_of_GREED:oh here it comes the fan of TLM dude stop with the promotion gig it's looks like ur paid to do this p s would write new chapters for ur novel or that's dropped?
ShadowdraculLv5

Fantasy Simulator started out quite good but suddenly in the middle it felt like author got feedback and wanted to expand and killed the planet to get him more opportunities as well as the new system. Plus the story is all over the place with him suddenly remembering a function he didn’t mention for ages and all. Also the translation is absolutely terrible with huge skips in chapter content.

Sin_of_GREEDLv14

the k illing of planet is called a plot twist which is very rare in chinese novels i loved the part of the novel as it add a lot of mystery to it last i don't understand why are some people are so dumb that they shout this novel is bad because the translation is bad like they so ignorant that they don't even know how MTL works and then go on and compare it with other works with proper editor and translators

Shadowdracul:Fantasy Simulator started out quite good but suddenly in the middle it felt like author got feedback and wanted to expand and killed the planet to get him more opportunities as well as the new system. Plus the story is all over the place with him suddenly remembering a function he didn’t mention for ages and all. Also the translation is absolutely terrible with huge skips in chapter content.
brockarot_falconLv11

Honestly, the killing of the planet scene was interesting and actually written well, but I can't remember anything after that. I'm pretty sure that I dropped it there. Also, I think that other guy was just saying that he, just like me, might've appreciated either a better explanation for the death of the world, or no death at all. The story was going pretty good just like that at the time, no need for a plot twist.

Sin_of_GREED:the k illing of planet is called a plot twist which is very rare in chinese novels i loved the part of the novel as it add a lot of mystery to it last i don't understand why are some people are so dumb that they shout this novel is bad because the translation is bad like they so ignorant that they don't even know how MTL works and then go on and compare it with other works with proper editor and translators
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

it's called fantasy simulator so it must have a good sense of mystery/unknown unlike normal chinese novels where writer tells everything beforehand

brockarot_falcon:Honestly, the killing of the planet scene was interesting and actually written well, but I can't remember anything after that. I'm pretty sure that I dropped it there. Also, I think that other guy was just saying that he, just like me, might've appreciated either a better explanation for the death of the world, or no death at all. The story was going pretty good just like that at the time, no need for a plot twist.
brockarot_falconLv11

Wait a second... I hate mystery novels. I chose that one specifically because it was a fantasy novel with no mystery. I am one of the rare haters of Lord of the Mysteries. Also, I'm pretty sure that FS has no mystery tag.

Sin_of_GREED:it's called fantasy simulator so it must have a good sense of mystery/unknown unlike normal chinese novels where writer tells everything beforehand
brockarot_falconLv11

Wait a second... I chose to read FS specifically because it was a fantasy novel with no mystery. I, myself, am a hardcore hater of mystery novels of all kinds. I am also one of the rare few who dislikes Lord of the Mysteries. I'm also pretty sure that FS has no mystery tag, else I probably wouldn't read it.

Sin_of_GREED:it's called fantasy simulator so it must have a good sense of mystery/unknown unlike normal chinese novels where writer tells everything beforehand
brockarot_falconLv11

Wait a second... I chose to read FS specifically because it was a fantasy novel with no mystery. I, myself, am a hardcore hater of mystery novels of all kinds. I am also one of the rare few who dislikes Lord of the Mysteries. I'm also pretty sure that FS has no mystery tag, else I probably wouldn't read it.

brockarot_falconLv11

Wait a second... I chose to read FS specifically because it was a fantasy novel with no mystery. I, myself, am a hardcore hater of mystery novels of all kinds. I am also one of the rare few who dislikes Lord of the Mysteries. I'm also pretty sure that FS has no mystery tag, else I probably wouldn't read it.

brockarot_falconLv11

Wait a second... I chose to read FS specifically because it was a fantasy novel with no mystery. I, myself, am a hardcore hater of mystery novels of all kinds. I am also one of the rare few who dislikes Lord of the Mysteries. I'm also pretty sure that FS has no mystery tag, else I probably wouldn't read it.

Sin_of_GREED:it's called fantasy simulator so it must have a good sense of mystery/unknown unlike normal chinese novels where writer tells everything beforehand
brockarot_falconLv11

please ignore the five responses and treat them as one... I was having wifi problems...

brockarot_falcon:Wait a second... I chose to read FS specifically because it was a fantasy novel with no mystery. I, myself, am a hardcore hater of mystery novels of all kinds. I am also one of the rare few who dislikes Lord of the Mysteries. I'm also pretty sure that FS has no mystery tag, else I probably wouldn't read it.
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

yep this happens when one has a lagy internet and presses add button a few more times(no. of times u press add =no. of copies generated) some people use this flood 5 star reviews p s doesn't it has unknowns like who was the hand,why earth,and that traveling from earth other world etc etc thou it not mystery heavy as Lom but most fantasy works have some mystery elements in it which is the part of a what as a fantasy with mystery is just boring like the generic Jp isekai novels

brockarot_falcon:please ignore the five responses and treat them as one... I was having wifi problems...
brockarot_falconLv11

Yes, but I mean not mystery heavy like LoM. I read the beginning few chapters of Lom and couldn't get past that. A mystery about why this guy killed himself? Nope for me. But the main point of FS is that it focuses on the fighting, action, and 'getting stronger.' Whenever that 'mysterious hand' pops up, the MC jumps straight back into the simulator for some more straightforward action and self-strengthening. So yes, I hate mystery, but let's just be real here. Every book worth it's salt is mysterious in some way. Because if it weren't, then we'd know the ending.

Sin_of_GREED:yep this happens when one has a lagy internet and presses add button a few more times(no. of times u press add =no. of copies generated) some people use this flood 5 star reviews p s doesn't it has unknowns like who was the hand,why earth,and that traveling from earth other world etc etc thou it not mystery heavy as Lom but most fantasy works have some mystery elements in it which is the part of a what as a fantasy with mystery is just boring like the generic Jp isekai novels
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GrandpaPengLv4

The chapters are split up. Chapter 40(1) on webnovel is actually chapter 19 MTL/RAW. The site smuggled in a new business opportunity - splitting the chapters. In this case, they gave us less than 19 full chapters. Used to be 60.. 40.. What a magic! Of deception. The first chapters.. are unpolished by the author in my opinion. But if it improves later on then it's fine. There's some bland, stiff dialogue, unnatural behaviour, forced plot. The high rating's reason? Author's name does the job, for example. Besides, there's potential, just that the execution so far is average. The MC got [Agility] talent, then after using it he calls himself talented while being serious. Ha ha ha.. :D It's one of these novels where the one that takes MC role is decided by system (or well, apparently it's his Super ability). The author doesn't bother to write about the process of e.g. overcoming a language barrier. Just use system and... done, problem solved. For convenience... Grown men shown so far have somewhat flawed, unsuitable mentality for the roles they play (apparently they are experienced hunters but I wonder how they grew up and how they survived till now in such a dangerous world). The MC himself is alright, a bit dumb, a sheltered flower, no survival skills, so whatever logic or reasoning he comes up with is fine:) Hopefully he'll grow up as his adventures continue, or else be prepared for masterminds to have less IQ than he does. The author chose to write a novel with system and copied a popular idea. What was his motivation for this, one could wonder. In the same batch of trials, the author of "Protect our Patriarch(Chief)" actually roasted this kind of system novels. My comment is based only on the 19 (split into 40) chapters translated right now, because I have not touched MTL. If I read more chapters in future I'll either re-write my comment or add a fresh one with proper rating. 19 is not much after all and the subsequent might have a higher quality, I don't know. There are novels like World's Best Martial Artist, Museum of Deadly Beasts, A Sorcerer's Journey, Black Iron's Glory and many more that had even more boring, or cliche, or flawed initial chapters yet turned out to be much much better as I continued to read. It might also be the case with Astral Apostle.

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