The story started out great, but then the harem quickly grew and the MC really appreciates and cares for all his women, which is usually fine for a small harem but not a huge one like his. As a result all real progress in the story is kept to a minimum and most chapters are about the MC's relationship with his women. I confess the story is very well written and all these relationships are well developed, but they became the complete focus of the story to the point where everything else became secondary and this became completely a harem romance fanfic about an MC constantly picking up new women and interacting with them sometimes taking a break for an quick adventure.
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