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Animesh_Tewary
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2022-01-19 23:42

just found this book very much intrested in this book after reading the synopsis and the important announcnent part where the main character is not a simple or simply beta mc which are expected but let's see what the novel has to offer us .. I will post my comments in comments section.. and even might change the review now I am going to start this delicious meal

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DMadLord
DMadLordAuthor

So what do you think of the book so far?

PatriarchDaoSeeker
PatriarchDaoSeekerLv4

Ima read this cus people keep reccomending it to me

DMadLord:So what do you think of the book so far?
DMadLord
DMadLordAuthor

Check it out and please reserve judgement until you're past the first 30 chapters or so.

PatriarchDaoSeeker:Ima read this cus people keep reccomending it to me
Sim_Um
Sim_UmLv14

is it harem?

That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

It’s not no romance no harem

Sim_Um:is it harem?
Sim_Um
Sim_UmLv14

thank you for the answer.I hate harem so I will give it a try

Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Is mc a polymath ?

DMadLord:Check it out and please reserve judgement until you're past the first 30 chapters or so.
DMadLord
DMadLordAuthor

he is not a polymath. why do you ask?

Romance_guy:Is mc a polymath ?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Just wanted to know

DMadLord:he is not a polymath. why do you ask?
The_ColIector
The_ColIectorLv4

this guy makes top notch stuff

Sim_Um:thank you for the answer.I hate harem so I will give it a try
om_pawar_5650
om_pawar_5650Lv3

Author give discord link plz, if its still Active. I am around d@£@£ birth, and i cant understand stuff. Authority, supreme law, spark? I was hoping to asl this in discord.

DMadLord:So what do you think of the book so far?
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