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2021-11-27 17:08

Amongst the best novels I’ve read on here. It’s not a fanfic, it just steals elements from Bloodborne. If this was a regular novel, I’d pay good money for it. The writing is filled with errors, but the prose itself is great. The world building is extensive and complex; while the plot is original and building to be epic in scale. My onLu complaint is the formatting, reading it can be difficult. Well done mate, keep it up!!!

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In the most recent chapter, the formating has already changed to the normal one used in the Us if I am not mistaken. Thank you for the review. I can't do much about the writing since English is my first language. I am getting better and better, the only editor I have is the automatic corrector from google docs and Grammarly. At least, I am better than many of those translations out there, I think its more than readble

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Abadom:In the most recent chapter, the formating has already changed to the normal one used in the Us if I am not mistaken. Thank you for the review. I can't do much about the writing since English is my first language. I am getting better and better, the only editor I have is the automatic corrector from google docs and Grammarly. At least, I am better than many of those translations out there, I think its more than readble
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