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issei_kozuki
issei_kozukiLv33yr
2021-11-16 03:23

the mc isn't even trying . its so generic and boring . yes he doesn't have the powers but atleast make something that will give him powers or something that will enable him to take sacred gears or something . news flash genius!! mc is in the story already . gremorys are acting different . plot has already change . so why don't you take out that rod out of your bottom and write something good or just stop writing this piece of garbage

Godly crafter in DxD

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PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

3yr
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uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

Oh god you actually LIKE those kinds of stories? What a sad joke you are.

3yr
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tarnation
tarnationLv4

the mc ability only gives him the ability to create what he wants. He can't just make stuff out of thin air. This mainly comes from a misunderstanding of the mc's ability.

2yr
DaoistJhtAYc
DaoistJhtAYcLv4

I mean didn't he literally come up with a way to take out the divinity of dormant and active sacred gears? so doen't it stand within reason he could figure out a way to transfer either that sacred gear or the divinity used in it into himself...that also stand to reason he can figure out a way to activate his dormant genes/dna, as long as he have enough knowledge he can instantly know how to create the thing he needs to do it

tarnation:the mc ability only gives him the ability to create what he wants. He can't just make stuff out of thin air. This mainly comes from a misunderstanding of the mc's ability.
2yr
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Pork
PorkLv12

this is another one of those novels that uses forced plot to to push a certain narrative,and in this case it is bad.since this is a fanfiction.. why bother to reincarnate him into gregory family,.if you are just gonna have them become indifferent to him, especially rias, makes zero sense since in the world of dxd this is one of the clans that puts family first especially rias.. so he the author has forced olot for what? a cool back story for when he gets revenge or face slaps them? because he is to lazy or cannot right decent interpersonal relationships ? and if that is the case why not just reincarnate him into literally any other clan? it is silly and forced... another author who cannot even bother to stick true to the original content.. change the plot as much as you want but if you change the personalities without reason than that is just bad writing.

3yr

AbandonedToGodhood
AbandonedToGodhoodLv14

The Mc gets neglected by his own family since he was a kid, yet he still allows them to run over him like a rag doll without retaliating/revenge. He's basically a full-blown beta,

3yr
happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

Its interesting but the mc is stupid as he doesnt cut ties with his family or does he think to create something that cam steal the clans trait and give it to him or better yet just look in to his dna and activate his clan traits if he doesn't know how steal the knowledge

3yr
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

has a harem but not a harem tag. get what you deserve...........................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
0_Ancient_Daoist_0
0_Ancient_Daoist_0Lv4

so far I have no problems with this, its really good to be honest. like how his character is, if you had an oc born and not reincarnated then we would have had an emo character. would he still forgive his family later on ? don't really like that, indifference is better to be honest.

3yr
Nyxarias
NyxariasLv5

MC is an Idiot and a Beta

3yr
bigpollo
bigpolloLv14

Mc is a smart Idiot that is somewhat naive but also jaded? He seems to be okay with abuse against him and is basically a doormat to his family. He is also 10 so… the story is okay but the format is weird af. hope author don’t delete this because They needs some criticism. Mc is also very plastic in his design and there are so many Plotholes. the mc is a walking one. good lUck

3yr
XIANJING
XIANJINGLv3

I expect too much with this fanfic, because this fanfic is ranked in the top 10. I was curious and read it and stopped at chapter 17, social interactions are very awkward like children's writing, and the reason MC is being ostracized by his family is something I don't understand and it's too ridiculous, there is another fanfic that deserves a better rating than this fanfic!

3yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The problem is MC. Mc is beta, stupid...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
TrueLordTrueLaw
TrueLordTrueLawLv3

This would be the true definition of an AU, because the characters here do not share anything with their original versions either their attitude or morality. The only thing they have in common would be their names and the description of their appearance. Ignoring that, the story seems interesting if somewhat messy in some respects.

3yr
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