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AbandonedToGodhood
AbandonedToGodhoodLv143yr
2021-11-04 11:33

The Mc gets neglected by his own family since he was a kid, yet he still allows them to run over him like a rag doll without retaliating/revenge. He's basically a full-blown beta,

Godly crafter in DxD

Mangadonf
4.3
55 Chs

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natsudesai
natsudesaiLv4

Chinese female main character

3yr
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LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13

I agree fully with this review.

3yr
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Redzeth
RedzethLv14

First of all he is a child in a family which has full control over his movement. Second of all, he is not treated like a rag, he is treated like air which he very much returns to them. Third of all, how is he a beta when he isn’t even at the age where he can retaliate or even get it up for that matter? The fact that this has so many upvotes just shows how many brainless people there are

3yr
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Faithlesszealot
FaithlesszealotLv3

He leaves as quick as he can and has as little to do with them after, that sounds reasonable. Are you one of those edge lords who want him to murder his family when he is 6 just because they ignore him for his sister? That sounds psychopathic to me.

3yr
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AbandonedToGodhood
AbandonedToGodhoodLv14

No, I want him to basically disown them as his family. They basically treat him as a tool and he allows it.

Faithlesszealot:He leaves as quick as he can and has as little to do with them after, that sounds reasonable. Are you one of those edge lords who want him to murder his family when he is 6 just because they ignore him for his sister? That sounds psychopathic to me.
3yr
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AbandonedToGodhood
AbandonedToGodhoodLv14

He treats them back like air ? That’s a lie. Did you just skim through the chapters ?

Redzeth:First of all he is a child in a family which has full control over his movement. Second of all, he is not treated like a rag, he is treated like air which he very much returns to them. Third of all, how is he a beta when he isn’t even at the age where he can retaliate or even get it up for that matter? The fact that this has so many upvotes just shows how many brainless people there are
3yr
13
Redzeth
RedzethLv14

Besides his mother he does NOTHING to please them, he gets away from them as soon as he can and only goes back as soon as he is called simply because he can’t go against the heads orders. It seems you are the one who has no clue what he’s talking about

AbandonedToGodhood:He treats them back like air ? That’s a lie. Did you just skim through the chapters ?
3yr
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AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv13

this is what it's mean beta...return as soon as he can just because being called by head of family....meh

Redzeth:Besides his mother he does NOTHING to please them, he gets away from them as soon as he can and only goes back as soon as he is called simply because he can’t go against the heads orders. It seems you are the one who has no clue what he’s talking about
3yr
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DamianSegorski
DamianSegorskiLv10

I mean I believe it's against devil law to disobey the head of your clan so he kinda has to. So the mc isnt a beta, and even then you do realize there's a thing called avoiding unnecessary drama

AntiWorldSystem:this is what it's mean beta...return as soon as he can just because being called by head of family....meh
3yr
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lectorviciado
lectorviciadoLv1

Estas olvidando que entre otras muchas cosas, es una persona rencarnada pasando por los cambios hormonales de un niño mas solo con la mentalidad de divertirse. Si tu familia una noble y antigua te cuida las necesidades basicas comida ropa refugio formacion etc . Tu madre dentro de lo que cabe ( PORQUE RECORDEMOS QUE SI ES EL SOLO AL NACER SIN RIAS Y NO TIENE MAGIA GRIMORI LA MATAN POR INFIEL ). Te escucha y te quiere y presta atencion (que lo hace se puede ver claramente que es su favorito de lejos) puedes guardar rencor con todos los demas y hacerles putadas como lo de grafia y el walki-talki o su padre y el metodo de los cuadros pero por lo demas si quieres que valla a modo ITACHI pues ..... Haztelo mirar tio

3yr
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Yorgan
YorganLv12

Redzeth is retard bro

AntiWorldSystem:this is what it's mean beta...return as soon as he can just because being called by head of family....meh
3yr
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Vaibhav_Dubey_5094
Vaibhav_Dubey_5094Lv1

Bro why Disown them like they are Big clan and can provide resources and links like come on If not for his clan Can he talk or Dare to mess with Big shorts of the World they Didn't Abuse him and starve him and people still treat him with respect

AbandonedToGodhood:No, I want him to basically disown them as his family. They basically treat him as a tool and he allows it.
3yr
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Yami_Ryuujin
Yami_RyuujinLv4

That's right. And it is clearly said that he wants nothing with plot and just be safe without being involved in any dramas.

DamianSegorski:I mean I believe it's against devil law to disobey the head of your clan so he kinda has to. So the mc isnt a beta, and even then you do realize there's a thing called avoiding unnecessary drama
3yr
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Yami_Ryuujin
Yami_RyuujinLv4

Wow! And where in the Novel did you find him being used like a tool? Also It's clearly explained in novel WHY he DOESN'T disown his clan. I'm wondering 🤔 what you read to say something dumb like that.

AbandonedToGodhood:No, I want him to basically disown them as his family. They basically treat him as a tool and he allows it.
3yr
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TruthExposer123
TruthExposer123Lv4

Too true

Redzeth:First of all he is a child in a family which has full control over his movement. Second of all, he is not treated like a rag, he is treated like air which he very much returns to them. Third of all, how is he a beta when he isn’t even at the age where he can retaliate or even get it up for that matter? The fact that this has so many upvotes just shows how many brainless people there are
3yr
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this is another one of those novels that uses forced plot to to push a certain narrative,and in this case it is bad.since this is a fanfiction.. why bother to reincarnate him into gregory family,.if you are just gonna have them become indifferent to him, especially rias, makes zero sense since in the world of dxd this is one of the clans that puts family first especially rias.. so he the author has forced olot for what? a cool back story for when he gets revenge or face slaps them? because he is to lazy or cannot right decent interpersonal relationships ? and if that is the case why not just reincarnate him into literally any other clan? it is silly and forced... another author who cannot even bother to stick true to the original content.. change the plot as much as you want but if you change the personalities without reason than that is just bad writing.

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happy_sad
happy_sadLv13

Its interesting but the mc is stupid as he doesnt cut ties with his family or does he think to create something that cam steal the clans trait and give it to him or better yet just look in to his dna and activate his clan traits if he doesn't know how steal the knowledge

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ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

has a harem but not a harem tag. get what you deserve...........................................................................................................................................................................................................

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0_Ancient_Daoist_0
0_Ancient_Daoist_0Lv4

so far I have no problems with this, its really good to be honest. like how his character is, if you had an oc born and not reincarnated then we would have had an emo character. would he still forgive his family later on ? don't really like that, indifference is better to be honest.

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Nyxarias
NyxariasLv5

MC is an Idiot and a Beta

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Underwaterflame
UnderwaterflameLv14

Mc is a smart Idiot that is somewhat naive but also jaded? He seems to be okay with abuse against him and is basically a doormat to his family. He is also 10 so… the story is okay but the format is weird af. hope author don’t delete this because They needs some criticism. Mc is also very plastic in his design and there are so many Plotholes. the mc is a walking one. good lUck

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XIANJING
XIANJINGLv3

I expect too much with this fanfic, because this fanfic is ranked in the top 10. I was curious and read it and stopped at chapter 17, social interactions are very awkward like children's writing, and the reason MC is being ostracized by his family is something I don't understand and it's too ridiculous, there is another fanfic that deserves a better rating than this fanfic!

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Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The problem is MC. Mc is beta, stupid...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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TrueLordTrueLawLv3

This would be the true definition of an AU, because the characters here do not share anything with their original versions either their attitude or morality. The only thing they have in common would be their names and the description of their appearance. Ignoring that, the story seems interesting if somewhat messy in some respects.

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