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Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv143yr
2021-10-19 14:43

The idea is interesting, but grammar is awful, not in that there are errors, but in it jumping between correctly written paragraphs and machine-translated quality sentences, It feels like a bunch of authors wrote sentence by sentence in a forum, and most of them are foreigners using bing to translate.

DxD: Ink and summoning

LaYEn
4.2
103 Chs

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LaYEn
LaYEnAuthor

Thanks for the comment. Any example? Or suggestion on how to improve it?

3yr
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Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv14

If you are translating to English your story directly or with a translating aid, do one version for the whole paragraph and another for each sentence by itself. Afterwards you can read both out loud to check if it sounds okay and then rebuild using the best of both, and finally, pass the text through grammarly.

LaYEn:Thanks for the comment. Any example? Or suggestion on how to improve it?
3yr
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LaYEn
LaYEnAuthor

Thanks. I will try to do it like that.

Kabuk5:If you are translating to English your story directly or with a translating aid, do one version for the whole paragraph and another for each sentence by itself. Afterwards you can read both out loud to check if it sounds okay and then rebuild using the best of both, and finally, pass the text through grammarly.
3yr
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LaYEn
LaYEnAuthor

Fixed the grammar

3yr
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Dana_Brew
Dana_BrewLv4

To much " ... " please use comas instead

3yr
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WillOblivionK
WillOblivionKLv4

After translating use the Grammerly free version. It helps a lot

LaYEn:Fixed the grammar
3yr
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JheyDi
JheyDiLv3

Try Use Quillbot. com (Just remove the comma) you can Improve your Grammar there 👌

LaYEn:Fixed the grammar
3yr
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LaYEn
LaYEnAuthor

Thanks

JheyDi:Try Use Quillbot. com (Just remove the comma) you can Improve your Grammar there 👌
3yr
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crinix
crinixLv14

it's very confusing

3yr
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The story itself is fine, but the grammar if lacking. Furthermore There are various parts throughout the story where things aren’t properly explained, such as the sudden change in perspectives with no direct way of determining which persons point of view is being used(the first fight with the devils). Additionaly english sentences don’t have exclamation points in front of them. Overall the idea is interesting but the execution is someWhat lacking. I really look forward to seeing this story improve and grow as it is a rather interesting idea. Also a rather small nitpick, but in the title it should be DxD not Dxd.

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Grammar and some writing errors stuff or something... Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler

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Krishnbarad
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The Story is quite nice, even though the very concept is quite similar to that of the DxD: Summoning; another good fanfic in web novel, but still the content is enjoyable, its just that I unable to understand most of the parts due to bad grammar, otherwise its fine enough to read, and I will give you 5 stars cause of your hard work as writing is hard and I know cause I am a writer myself, just keep going, dude...😏

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