The idea is interesting, but grammar is awful, not in that there are errors, but in it jumping between correctly written paragraphs and machine-translated quality sentences, It feels like a bunch of authors wrote sentence by sentence in a forum, and most of them are foreigners using bing to translate.

The story is good and all but its just all over the place. I gets to one point to another and sometimes you don't even know how the mc got their. It doesn't explain. If it were better though it would be a good story.

DxD world has more then enought waifus but too add more women from anthor worlds this is too much the plot is ………… I dont like it the story is lam

Great story but it is a hard read not as bad as most machine translated stuff but still quite bad but it is a fun read Great story but it is a hard read not as bad as most machine translated stuff but still quite bad but it is a fun read

The story itself is fine, but the grammar if lacking. Furthermore There are various parts throughout the story where things aren’t properly explained, such as the sudden change in perspectives with no direct way of determining which persons point of view is being used(the first fight with the devils). Additionaly english sentences don’t have exclamation points in front of them. Overall the idea is interesting but the execution is someWhat lacking. I really look forward to seeing this story improve and grow as it is a rather interesting idea. Also a rather small nitpick, but in the title it should be DxD not Dxd.

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The Story is quite nice, even though the very concept is quite similar to that of the DxD: Summoning; another good fanfic in web novel, but still the content is enjoyable, its just that I unable to understand most of the parts due to bad grammar, otherwise its fine enough to read, and I will give you 5 stars cause of your hard work as writing is hard and I know cause I am a writer myself, just keep going, dude...😏