Good writing quality, in comparison to other works where people mess up with gender of characters or smth like that, here everything is decent. Unfortunately, plot is a little lacking, probably it is very difficult to write something interesting about OP guy, but later it was said that his speedforce is incomplete etc etc etc. However, he becomes even more powerful, why are u strengthening him, if u already cannot pull something interesting with his level of power to happen. MC could be interesting if not for his limited brain capacity. He really doesn't need to hide or have double identity, no need to be hero, love interests doesn't suit his character at all. Author tried to make him caring and loving for his people, but cold and ruthless for enemy or others, but that doesn't work. In the end he become clichรฉ protag of many harem novels where everything is covered by his hypocrisy. Update rate is good, it is where u get full 5 mark, but I wish u spend more time to analyze, what do u want to do with your main hero. I better read less chapters with interesting plot than a lot of chapters that doesn't make a sense or move the plot. And I am disappointed by passive attitude of mc. World BG could be 3 stars cause some goddes is too obsessed with our protag for no reason. Literally 0 reasons to interfere or interact with MC after his reincarnation. In addition, speedforce theme is not well described, speedforce is one of the pillars that make DC multiverse in equal footing with emotional spectre or life force or gods sphere. So, if speedster is moved from DC to another univers, he losses his speedforce abilities, and if he doesn't, which means that this universe also has it. So, how quirks limit the speedforce and force it to work? U can't just make it like that without any explanation when MC can ask these questions from goddes directly.
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This last was a much more useful criticism than a whole bunch of blasphemous and just hateful criticism. Thank you for this. I'll be giving a season-final soon. In this season finale, I'm going to fix the typos in the first episodes, go over the mistakes in the characters and the story, and think about a lot of my other problems. I'll go over the helpful information in this comment specifically.
