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Sham_Pain
Sham_PainLv43yr
2021-11-08 12:36

The time is impossible to understand. Trying to follow the story gives me headaches. There is practically no mention that the MC is in UA at all and the only real hint he is Nejire mentioning that something happened to class 1-A. it jumps around way too much. The underground fighting ring came out of no where and is honestly kind of boring. The character interactions are fine, but it feels like the rest of the world is ignored completely.

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EZRED
EZREDAuthor

Thanks for the critique

Samina_Nazir
Samina_NazirLv3

so a clueless person with no knowledge of fictional chracters get reincarted.No different than a world native.

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