Not bad , not good, well too much plothole, some time skips without explanation , and worst of all speed force missused, why missude? well think with me, flash its a hero from dc right ? ok ! so Dc has that thing about no no kills right ? ok! so lets think , MC its not hero and doenst bother about the kills, until thne ok. but why in dafuq he's usind fist if his objective its to kill ? if u give him a butter knife imagine the dmg hes gonna do, Speed force + Blade weapon , but noooooooooo lets gona punch like a idiot ,and worst of all its that he doenst use speed force when he's on disguise , if hes not gona be a hero why he's hiding and not training THE speed force. well if u ignore all above, its a good nove, for me its a waste of power on a stupid mc. a thats only speed force, if u include his quirk , just imagine, Use speed reading until limite, and use break limit on brain, well sorry for the rambling just dont like kind mc that waste a Stupid oP power ;
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Thanks for the review. I will consider what you have said.
if you can understand it
sigh ๐, Third rate authors are popping like worms these days
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Actually he doesn't even need the knife,he can just reverse-flashed them.
