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2022-01-04 09:04

Everything fine but just problems with the time skips and stuff like that but what hurts me truly is how he treats nejire you might at first think oh what do you mean he is kind and loving and such but it just bugs me that he cheats on her with rumi and if i had to guess probably spends more time with rumi than her and after that near death incident he tells her that he wants a harem just after she survived and probably wants the comfort of him and he wants all this just because of a desire which seems to be stronger than his love for her so it gets all confusing with how much it is shown that he 'Loves' her so this is what kinda ruined the whole thing for me and it shows later on he will become more selfish and it kinda runis the whole romance part which puts me off this story but if i am wrong about this since i just got up to chapter 29 and stop there just tell me if its worth reading more

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As an author, of course, I want you to read this, but if you're asking from a romantic point of view, something like what you went through with Nejire will never happen again. But let me explain this. What I wanted to say in that part was: Blake tells Nejire that he wants a harem so that if she doesn't want to be in a relationship like that, she can start a new life without him when she gets out of the hospital. And he doesn't exactly leave her there alone, so she's with her family, and he has things to do, and after all he's said, he can't just stand there, right? It might be a little selfish, but it had to be lived. I just took that back a bit. Other than that, I can't tell you to read it or not to read it (I think you should). Decide for yourself, but let me tell you that the Multi-verse phase will come soon and I plan to expand the world.

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ty for responding

EZRED:As an author, of course, I want you to read this, but if you're asking from a romantic point of view, something like what you went through with Nejire will never happen again. But let me explain this. What I wanted to say in that part was: Blake tells Nejire that he wants a harem so that if she doesn't want to be in a relationship like that, she can start a new life without him when she gets out of the hospital. And he doesn't exactly leave her there alone, so she's with her family, and he has things to do, and after all he's said, he can't just stand there, right? It might be a little selfish, but it had to be lived. I just took that back a bit. Other than that, I can't tell you to read it or not to read it (I think you should). Decide for yourself, but let me tell you that the Multi-verse phase will come soon and I plan to expand the world.
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