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not really , like the saying... fear not the man that knows 10.000 moves, fear the man that knows 1 move trained 10.000 times ... i think its something like that

i know ... but theres no description of mc from author...

almost everything is good. just some little problems that its getting worst the more you read... the timeline of everything is messed... if i calculated right its 130 chps = 5 days ... and he has a date on one days on the next day he talks like it was like a week ago ... and i still dont know how the mc look like... because extreme handsome its not a description ... But its a translation... the translation its good ... not perfect ( too much chinese slang ) but its perfect readable

if the sypnopsis is already wrong, you cant wait for better content inside the fic ...

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one more fanfiction ruined ( for me ) because summoning character , and worst " 100% loyal " yeah , big turn off ........................................

just imagine . mc its a idiot but like all chinese ff, lets make everyone more stupid than the mc to make it seens that the mc is smart i have nothing against chinese ff , sometimes is good, but too much is anoying , if only mc was speaking in chinese way , and everyone else in character its barely ok , but a japanese anime turn in almost cultivator ff ( without the meditation part and cultivating to become immortal ) . if thats not a turn off for you then is a good novel

https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter's-revenge_30318418806989705#review or this is a copy or its original , i dont know who copied from who

https://www.webnovel.com/book/harry-potter-a-tale-of-revenge_27298423905073605 or this is copy or original i dont know who copied from who

i didnt read, i dont know whats its about , i dont know if its my racional brain thinking , but going to give you some question , fist - its harry smart ? ( tittle says witty wizard ) so lets assume that him is smart if he's so smart , why wait until 4º year to start to show he's smart , doenst make sense, " Ok its a fanfiction bla bla bla " but if its so unreal then doesnt apeal to me, my personal opnion of harry potter is - Hate harry potter ( the mc ) the wolrd of harry potter its awesome, like wolrd of high school dxd , like world of game of thrones etc, "ALMOST" every story ( fanfic, novel , movie etc ) has the worst kind of mc ( the stupid ) so i focus on fanfic of harry potter, theres so many awesomes fanfics about harry potter that explores the world of wizards , sry about the rant , that was to you understand why i hate the mc of original , and if you put another idiot as mc , that continue a good world with a crap mc, so the mc of you fanfic its smart , why wait until 4º year , and dont grab the first oportunity in fist year ? ah! and another thing , children abused doesnt turn people with golden heart , not in the kind of psyco , but untrustiful , another kind that harry is in original , so when i see a happy go luck with a fanfic , that triggers me a little , so , again sorry for rant , always see that kind fanfic where harry wait too much time to get up and fight back , and trust everyone . i have to much to rant about harry potter but should stop now ,