well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.
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Thanks for this review. I dislike it when authors knowingly nerf their characters simply to avoid making them too strong in the first place. If that’s the case then why even give said character such a powerful ability? Besides, Jujutsu Kaisen has sorcerers that experience very different growth curves. It isn’t a crime, simply impossible or not understandable to make a character strong at a young age. Yuta is the perfect example, Hakari too, even Maki, Megumi and Yuji.
Sometimes it's not even on purpose. Characters can only be as clever as the author.
