GSHURA

I read all the chapters till now and I can say that the story has a good potential. the problem is that the progress of the story is too slow and the chapters are short, Naruto was kidnapped chapters ago but until now we barely know anything about his kidnappers and why is he kidnapped? Clearly an Uzumaki survival did it but why? I feel that the summary of the fic talks about something and the chapters talk about something else.

awesome chapter as always, thanks a lot.

thanks for the chapter.

why do I feel that obito is under genjetsu

they were watching him of course. madara need someone naive, emotional and love greatly to manipulate him easily and help him awaken the mangekyo, especially the mangekyo as only awakened when member of the uchiha face great loss aka someone greatly love. You see that in canon, Madara manipulated the events for memeber of kiri to kidnapp Rin and seal the three tales in her, after that allwed obito to go and rescue her making sure that obito will fail. in the end, manipulating obito was a piece of cake.

well i did not like this chapter too much but good job regardless

interesting but this story is not my cup of tea. I am pretty sure that this is a translated chinese fic as I read something like this times ago. Regardless, good luck

nice chapter

heeeh to make the mc work under a R.O.B is not my cup of tea but I ll wait to see what will happend.

not bad for a beginning. the fic has a good potential and it's good but work in the length of your chapters