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RandomGuy2648
RandomGuy2648Lv23yr
2021-11-30 19:09

Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.

The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility

Levelling Up Alone
3.1
304 Chs

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Universal_Monarch
Universal_MonarchLv1

hah, way to discourage the poor guy, but i agree

2yr
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JOSH_ONE
JOSH_ONELv2

read Cultivator King, you won't be disappointed.

Universal_Monarch:hah, way to discourage the poor guy, but i agree
2yr
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Vollidiot
VollidiotLv6

So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.

2yr
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Universal_Monarch
Universal_MonarchLv1

thx

JOSH_ONE:read Cultivator King, you won't be disappointed.
2yr
JOSH_ONE
JOSH_ONELv2

Power Level : Immortals* it's on my page ;)

Universal_Monarch:thx
2yr
Universal_Monarch
Universal_MonarchLv1

thx

JOSH_ONE:Power Level : Immortals* it's on my page ;)
2yr
Luffy_For_The_Win
Luffy_For_The_WinLv4

There is a difference between marvel and this novel. Marvel is a major franchise loved by many that has years of buildup and credible plot(time stone didn’t really break the plot by the way) that is able to give good stories with good explanations behind instances. This story on the other hand is like, here is power and he is instantly able to control said power with no real character development.

Vollidiot:So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.
2yr
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Spare_
Spare_Lv14

did u rly jus compare marvel to this💀

Vollidiot:So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.
2yr
4
Phantom_X143
Phantom_X143Lv3

yes Marvel's entertaining and this is not..Grow up to know the difference.

Vollidiot:So, I assume you hate Marvel and the Avengers or any other action movie aswell? Ooh wow a plothole... except that it gets solved if you had read a few chapters more ...As soon as the Timestone got involved everything in the Marvel MCU is a plothole, do people have problem with that? NO! Because it is entertaining. Grow up.
1yr
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Hansroy_Nielsen
Hansroy_NielsenLv15

Chapter 8 covers that plothole

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Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3

Everything was going good till ahhh people came in and they talk on the very first day as if they all have full knowledge about the apocalypse.... children being like mommy will I grow up and become like that and those dumb dialogue ... Repeated sentences..... RUINED

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Fam_Lit
Fam_LitLv3

Way too many plotholes, the translation is garbage and some of the “China is the best and korea bad” at chapter 7 its a pretty bad novel dont recommend.

3yr
Wolf_of_Conquer
Wolf_of_ConquerLv4

The normals know too much. There are so many plotholes and utter stupidness. Translation is also horrible. Wouldn't recommend 😨. ............

3yr
Imperial_Monarch
Imperial_MonarchLv11

Cliche novel with op cheats, but still cliche.............................................................................................................

3yr
Imt_Shaz
Imt_ShazLv15

there are many things which are not explained properly.... like how does others have information about catacombs and dungeons..... how does others know that he wants to become nature mage??? does everyone get extra stats when they lvl up??? if not then y do you have to lvl up??? he only got one additional stat for 5 lvls!!! I mean with his amazing luck and all if geting stats with SSS skill is sooo low then is it still SSS skil??? many discriptions are not clear.... her sister is unconscious/ in coma??? and he said they are in a hotel room!!! who is taking care of her??? what about her food for sooo many days???? lot of questions I hope Author answers

3yr
Jay_Soul
Jay_SoulLv15

Blatabt copy on a amazing book we already have being translated since 1 year ago [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
EyeBeast
EyeBeastLv13

Intrigued. Excited to see more.

3yr
WillowBamboo
WillowBambooLv11

Reveal spoiler

3yr
q00u
q00uLv6

If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess. The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened." The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters. It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.

2yr
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