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Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv33yr
2021-11-26 17:17

Everything was going good till ahhh people came in and they talk on the very first day as if they all have full knowledge about the apocalypse.... children being like mommy will I grow up and become like that and those dumb dialogue ... Repeated sentences..... RUINED

The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility

Levelling Up Alone
3.0
304 Chs

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TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15

thank you for the useful comment, most are just stupid spams or bots

3yr
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Kingsav_Savage
Kingsav_SavageLv12

Reason for that was “internal testers” or called “chosen ones” aka beta testers.

3yr
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Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4

so every freaking one had that ??? huh like everyone know every knowledge except the mc right dumb logic dumb novel

Kingsav_Savage:Reason for that was “internal testers” or called “chosen ones” aka beta testers.
3yr
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Kingsav_Savage
Kingsav_SavageLv12

Yes to the second part

Gojusensi_441:so every freaking one had that ??? huh like everyone know every knowledge except the mc right dumb logic dumb novel
3yr
6
ararCPA
ararCPALv13

agree

3yr
3
RandomGuy2648
RandomGuy2648Lv2

I saw the bad reviews and but the novel CONCEPT seems interesting. Therefore I will read it first then give a review based on what I read. Wish me luck!

3yr
9
Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3

Then why are you doing publicity here

RandomGuy2648:I saw the bad reviews and but the novel CONCEPT seems interesting. Therefore I will read it first then give a review based on what I read. Wish me luck!
3yr
13
right_nutof_madara
right_nutof_madaraLv1

Apocalypse_2ndLife:Then why are you doing publicity here
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3yr
9
JOSH_ONE
JOSH_ONELv2

read Cultivator King, you won't be disappointed.

3yr
1
JOSH_ONE
JOSH_ONELv2

read Cultivator King, you won't be disappointed.

TigerBlooImmortal:thank you for the useful comment, most are just stupid spams or bots
3yr
2
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4

same for you here

Apocalypse_2ndLife:Then why are you doing publicity here
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3yr
2
NaesCrij
NaesCrijLv3

way to ruin the mood... I read the sypnosis and I really love the introduction you know the skills he got... It has many possibilities... but if its just like you said then nah...

3yr
6
Marwolaeth117
Marwolaeth117Lv15

how goes it?

RandomGuy2648:I saw the bad reviews and but the novel CONCEPT seems interesting. Therefore I will read it first then give a review based on what I read. Wish me luck!
2yr
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Fam_Lit
Fam_LitLv3

Way too many plotholes, the translation is garbage and some of the “China is the best and korea bad” at chapter 7 its a pretty bad novel dont recommend.

3yr

RandomGuy2648
RandomGuy2648Lv2

Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.

3yr
Wolf_of_Conquer
Wolf_of_ConquerLv4

The normals know too much. There are so many plotholes and utter stupidness. Translation is also horrible. Wouldn't recommend 😨. ............

3yr
Imperial_Monarch
Imperial_MonarchLv11

Cliche novel with op cheats, but still cliche.............................................................................................................

3yr
M_Shaz_3A
M_Shaz_3ALv15

there are many things which are not explained properly.... like how does others have information about catacombs and dungeons..... how does others know that he wants to become nature mage??? does everyone get extra stats when they lvl up??? if not then y do you have to lvl up??? he only got one additional stat for 5 lvls!!! I mean with his amazing luck and all if geting stats with SSS skill is sooo low then is it still SSS skil??? many discriptions are not clear.... her sister is unconscious/ in coma??? and he said they are in a hotel room!!! who is taking care of her??? what about her food for sooo many days???? lot of questions I hope Author answers

3yr
Jay_Soul
Jay_SoulLv15

Blatabt copy on a amazing book we already have being translated since 1 year ago [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
EyeBeast
EyeBeastLv13

Intrigued. Excited to see more.

3yr
WillowBamboo
WillowBambooLv11

Reveal spoiler

3yr
q00u
q00uLv6

If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess. The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened." The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters. It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.

3yr
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