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Soulbond? Soo... susurros?
I don't mean to put any spoilers out there but are these corvi the same ones from primordial dimensions?
Finally something good! It has been so long since I found something readable. The pacing is fine but I feel like the author needs to describe the surroundings and the atmosphere more. I have quite an imaginative mind which is fine and all but there has to be a limit. If the surroundings are not described properly then my imagination will go wild and imagine the most absurd things, ruining the experience. If I know where the MC is and what it's supposed to look like, then the whole experience will be a much smoother and more immersive ride. Overall though, it's an amazing first chapter.
I was actually saying that I was unsure if it was lucky halo or not but this works too.
Ah, I see. Thanks for the heads up. I was getting ticked off at the early OPness
This is an amazing arc. I thought it was the wights or something but apparently not.
I have an idea for an AOE attack for Kilzachs. You don't have to use it or anything it's just a suggestion for fun. My idea is a string of knives or something similar that he throws at the enemy, then cuts it, and pastes it in the center of the formation. If he's being encircled, he can use it to carve a path in the encirclement. The idea is that the momentum of the string of knives when he throws them would carry on when he cuts then pastes it in order to both confuse the enemy (if they don't know about his ability) and deal a good amount of damage to them too. Although, a string of knives seems impossible to throw properly so he can use something else more suited to his fighting style. As for what that is, I'm not sure. He could also throw one of his swords like a boomerang, cut it, then paste it like before to achieve a similar effect. Of course, this is just my imagination talking so you don't have to take this idea especially if it interferes with the story in some way. Sorry if the comment was too long.
Oh no it's the lubes, isn't it?
Or you can just take off its head.
Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.