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moh999
moh999Lv63yr
2021-10-05 14:29

bad English though not as bad as the Rest and Mc is stupid enough to antagonize a high level death eater, Lucy Boy, Not a Great start at all, also he had 10 years to peice up the puzzle parts but he didn't

Hogwarts:NEWW

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Knight_Wolf
Knight_WolfLv5

well if several mages use magic in muggle world I don't think you can make a connection as in HP the wizards were tight-lipped about their existence.

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Knight_Wolf
Knight_WolfLv5

and the author did give a reason for his behaviour which actually made sense

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DeadHeart
DeadHeartLv1

I read 17 chapters before this comment... And i think it really true that wizards kept their existence a secret even with mages appearing in the muggle world. Normal people could only light up some small sparks with the power they had so in a sense, they are still normal people as their powers don't make a real impact. As for strong mages, wizards could just control them or use some contracts to keep their cooperation a secret.

Knight_Wolf:well if several mages use magic in muggle world I don't think you can make a connection as in HP the wizards were tight-lipped about their existence.
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DeadHeart
DeadHeartLv1

Yup. Even if you were 18 years old in your previous life, you can't just expect him to act like an adult right from the start when he is clearly a 11 year old boy. You can't just make his brain or soul that author mentioned develop to 18 years old in his 11 years of life.

Knight_Wolf:and the author did give a reason for his behaviour which actually made sense
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Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

Yes you can especially since he was reincarnated

DeadHeart:Yup. Even if you were 18 years old in your previous life, you can't just expect him to act like an adult right from the start when he is clearly a 11 year old boy. You can't just make his brain or soul that author mentioned develop to 18 years old in his 11 years of life.
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Author, I hope OC / Daphne - OC /any but not Hermione please, there are too many fanfiction with Hermione.

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Reveal spoiler

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roque_alfredo
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Is it harem, mc op, adventure or some information to know?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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rohit_shirsath
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Great work.I appreciate your efforts and i can see that how you are holding yourself from making harem 😂. Eagerly waiting for the next chapters , so keep it up 😉

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Phoenix1998
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good start so far. interesting. Hope to read more. good start so far. interesting. Hope to read more.good start so far. interesting. Hope to read more.

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mark_kiple
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Reveal spoiler

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Razish
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well it's interesting 🤠.. keep up the good work.. a bit slow story for me , try to pick up the speed a bit....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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LGK_maore
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finally ...... oh man really missed this 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍😍😍😍

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where are my chapters? i want more! ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

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