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when did he start making villain mistakes - make him suffer ?- like yeah OK, but do that once you have him ties up and under your mercy not when he had a gun and kararkesh, rooky mistakes, no matter what never let your guard down, ever.
correction not brain crusher but mind rapists
you have serious issue with writing the Ages ,once it's 16 another 11 , review what you wrote, brother, so that you never fall for such obvious mistakes, I had that and it was huge pain, wish you luck.
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he should take away the bijou from iwa , it will weaken them and put a restraint on the rest like kumo and mizugakure and show konoha as big Kahuna
just a correction, friend, Not talking about nationality
it's quite Potent
betrothed * not fiancee that's sounds French and everyone hates the French
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your guy should do something to stimulate the unlocking of the sharingan in both students, it would make his job easier, thus giving him more rewards and boosting his own growth, he should take all A rate talents and train them as well, cause leaving them out to dry is waste of potential, nothing serious like otherworldly techniques, rather something like better control and element training, he would Grow a strong political backing by powering the village and not just rid him of danzo but also become powerful enough for the seat of kage and then perhaps gain some more by learning immortality or some other important stuff, what's important is to be showing himself training elements one by one so hiruzen doesn't get paranoid or worse
that's the OG 👍👍👍
take over luthor's mind, their must be some scummy business men laying around on good ol' Terra
you just had to go there, didn't you!?
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