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moh999

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2018-05-04 JoinedIraq
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  • moh999
    moh9991d
    Commented

    when did he start making villain mistakes - make him suffer ?- like yeah OK, but do that once you have him ties up and under your mercy not when he had a gun and kararkesh, rooky mistakes, no matter what never let your guard down, ever.

    But no, not yet. The fight had to go on just a little longer. He had more suffering to endure. I wasn't done pouring out all my anger and frustration just yet.
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    Stargate: The Sov'ren
    TV · Reyes_II
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  • moh999
    moh9993d
    Commented

    correction not brain crusher but mind rapists

    But even though I was no threatened with anything for failure, now I had a chance to earn a THOUSAND experience for saving the "Princess of Braincrushers". Well, much higher than for the first quest, after all, it was just childish squabbles, even if I could also get ragged from Sasuke's parents. But here – one blow with a kunai from any of trio, and I'm just a corpse.
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    Naruto: Global Mission
    Anime & Comics · Langweil
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  • moh999
    moh9994d
    Posted

    That was the best Web novel Fanfiction I read this month, period. it was so captivating I burned my tongue while eating, good job. this is a great new idea which have never been introduced before, I applaud it 👏, well done and keep it up

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    Will of embers
    Anime & Comics · Ironwolf852
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  • moh999
    moh9995d
    Commented

    beautiful first chapter, this has quite the promise, keep it up

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Will of embers
    Anime & Comics · Ironwolf852
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  • moh999
    moh9997d
    Commented

    you have serious issue with writing the Ages ,once it's 16 another 11 , review what you wrote, brother, so that you never fall for such obvious mistakes, I had that and it was huge pain, wish you luck.

    I'm eleven name days now soon a man grown, my father has been preparing me to rule the north. Asks my opinions on decisions he is about to make even when he already has an answer in mind to me, I guess its a kind of test. I walk my way up the keep to his solar, knock before entering.
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    Mihawk in ASOIAF
    TV · Ash_D_Born
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  • moh999
    moh9997d
    Commented

    near*

    Devil Fruit: Gravity Fruit- Neer Awakened.
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    Mihawk in ASOIAF
    TV · Ash_D_Born
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  • moh999
    moh9999d
    Commented

    he should take away the bijou from iwa , it will weaken them and put a restraint on the rest like kumo and mizugakure and show konoha as big Kahuna

    Han, the Jinchuriki of Five Tails, Dead.
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • moh999
    moh99911d
    Posted

    Great work you have here, it began great and it's getting alone quite well, keep up the Magnificent work, there might be some slight misspelling but it can be ignored in light of the very entertaining read, Love it and nicely done. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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    A Tensura Elf in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · SleepySailor
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  • moh999
    moh99912d
    Replied to Ghostrider0002

    just a correction, friend, Not talking about nationality

    At the center of the room, Aegon was waiting for us with his fiancée, Princess Arianne Martell, on his arm, a fine match that will surely mend the offense his father committed by abandoning Elia Martell for Lyanna and will fully bring Dorne back into the fold.
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    Aegon Snow
    Book&Literature · Ghostrider0002
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  • moh999
    moh99913d
    Commented

    it's quite Potent

    And this is the capacity of the T-virus, whether it is developing weapons or medicines, it is omnipotent.
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    Marvel: Reincarnated as Aldrich Killian
    Movies · Muzan_Zoldyck
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  • moh999
    moh99914d
    Commented

    betrothed * not fiancee that's sounds French and everyone hates the French

    At the center of the room, Aegon was waiting for us with his fiancée, Princess Arianne Martell, on his arm, a fine match that will surely mend the offense his father committed by abandoning Elia Martell for Lyanna and will fully bring Dorne back into the fold.
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    Aegon Snow
    Book&Literature · Ghostrider0002
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  • moh999
    moh99916d
    Commented

    I totally agree with all of your Mc choices bar leaving the Tyrells-lannisters-Martells in power, but, unifying the crown-storm-river lands into a kingdom under the leadership of the Dragon that's something I'm totally with, please keep up the ggoodwork

    Ch 83 -Chapter 77-
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    Aegon Snow
    Book&Literature · Ghostrider0002
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  • moh999
    moh99919d
    Posted

    You just started this but I'm already hooked, keep up the great work, I can honestly say that I have been Hooked and would love to see more of this in the future.

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    Stargate: The Sov'ren
    TV · Reyes_II
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  • moh999
    moh99920d
    Commented

    you had a goof thing and then you ruined it 😒

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: Progress
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Anime & Comics · Sothisq
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  • moh999
    moh99922d
    Commented

    ceiling *

    'Wait is that the cealing of a tent? This isn't my room.'
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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
    TV · Inkbot
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  • moh999
    moh9991mth
    Commented

    your guy should do something to stimulate the unlocking of the sharingan in both students, it would make his job easier, thus giving him more rewards and boosting his own growth, he should take all A rate talents and train them as well, cause leaving them out to dry is waste of potential, nothing serious like otherworldly techniques, rather something like better control and element training, he would Grow a strong political backing by powering the village and not just rid him of danzo but also become powerful enough for the seat of kage and then perhaps gain some more by learning immortality or some other important stuff, what's important is to be showing himself training elements one by one so hiruzen doesn't get paranoid or worse

    Guy's journey was longer than Obito's, so Obito couldn't see Guy's figure for the time being.
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    Naruto: Strength Through Teaching
    Anime & Comics · ChaosNinja
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  • moh999
    moh9991mth
    Replied to HereForGoodRead

    that's the OG 👍👍👍

    Because I'm unique, I'm a Thinking Hat!
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    HP: The Red-Haired Wizard (Paused)
    Book&Literature · Worldofimagination
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  • moh999
    moh9991mth
    Commented

    take over luthor's mind, their must be some scummy business men laying around on good ol' Terra

    He had ordered them to ignore their fears which worked and they worked alongside him. No one died and he managed to create his forge room. It was primitive which cemented the idea that he had to get a rich billionaire under his control to supply him with the technology he wanted.
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • moh999
    moh9991mth
    Commented

    you just had to go there, didn't you!?

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  • moh999
    moh9991mth
    Commented

    meet you*

    "Warrior, I am Z'krekatt D'rukk of the Kataieus City State. As our previous messenger spoke, we would like to offer a peace treaty. Every time our warriors meat you they die and this loss of life is needless." 
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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