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Bierbart
BierbartLv143yr
2021-10-06 01:37

English is good. It seems slow paced, cause he didnt really try with his system and kind of gave up on it till the hogwartsletter cause he had no results. Low Rating ia cause of stupidity to go ham on a known influencal deatheater as an 11 year old muggleborn, cause hermione got a negative talk. After that strong cringemoments cause MC is a hermionefanboy who wants to rob the craddle. After it the event with the wands...

Hogwarts:NEWW

Ryu_Akatsuki_8599
4.1
25 Chs

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Ryu_Akatsuki_8599
Ryu_Akatsuki_8599Author

Thank you for reading. I will try to make it better in the future.

3yr
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Lycarus
LycarusLv2

Before reading, I was wondering if it will be just 1 love interest?

Ryu_Akatsuki_8599:Thank you for reading. I will try to make it better in the future.
3yr
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Ryu_Akatsuki_8599
Ryu_Akatsuki_8599Author

I really don't know about the future but I want to have only 1 for now

Lycarus:Before reading, I was wondering if it will be just 1 love interest?
3yr
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Lycarus
LycarusLv2

You only made me more confused, because now I'm afraid to read and then you make harem. I don't like harem.

Ryu_Akatsuki_8599:I really don't know about the future but I want to have only 1 for now
3yr
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Ryu_Akatsuki_8599
Ryu_Akatsuki_8599Author

80% chances that this one will not be harem 😅 I hope you can read it... but I respect your opinion... I didn't write this story in advance before uploading... I write a single chapter everyday and upload it right away. I have to think where story will go on the way, which is kinda hard but fun too. So I can't be 100% sure that there will be no harem in future but There are highest chances that Hermione is the only partner Adam(MC) will have even if he have other admirers.

Lycarus:You only made me more confused, because now I'm afraid to read and then you make harem. I don't like harem.
3yr
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Lycarus
LycarusLv2

thanks for the reply, i started reading your fic, keep up the good work!!

Ryu_Akatsuki_8599:80% chances that this one will not be harem 😅 I hope you can read it... but I respect your opinion... I didn't write this story in advance before uploading... I write a single chapter everyday and upload it right away. I have to think where story will go on the way, which is kinda hard but fun too. So I can't be 100% sure that there will be no harem in future but There are highest chances that Hermione is the only partner Adam(MC) will have even if he have other admirers.
3yr
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DeathInside
DeathInsideLv1

Author, I hope OC / Daphne - OC /any but not Hermione please, there are too many fanfiction with Hermione.

3yr

moh999
moh999Lv6

bad English though not as bad as the Rest and Mc is stupid enough to antagonize a high level death eater, Lucy Boy, Not a Great start at all, also he had 10 years to peice up the puzzle parts but he didn't

3yr
roque_alfredo
roque_alfredoLv1

Is it harem, mc op, adventure or some information to know?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

3yr
rohit_shirsath
rohit_shirsathLv1

Great work.I appreciate your efforts and i can see that how you are holding yourself from making harem 😂. Eagerly waiting for the next chapters , so keep it up 😉

3yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

good start so far. interesting. Hope to read more. good start so far. interesting. Hope to read more.good start so far. interesting. Hope to read more.

3yr
mark_kiple
mark_kipleLv3

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Razish
RazishLv14

well it's interesting 🤠.. keep up the good work.. a bit slow story for me , try to pick up the speed a bit....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

3yr
LGK_maore
LGK_maoreLv4

finally ...... oh man really missed this 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍😍😍😍

1yr
Cookies007
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