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Kenrio
KenrioLv113yr
2021-11-06 23:21

The world background and power system is nothing new but it's good enough. the problem is mc is a naive hypocrite, the type i hate the most. You know it's really ridiculous how he stop killing the wolves simple because he see the leader have a kid, and even kill the other enemy beast to protect the wolves simple because of this like the other beast dont have kid too. the fighting scenes are to bad too, and if author wanted to make this more of a farm nobel he should set the tone in the prologue this way even if the future fight scenes are trash not many people will care. For now my review is this,but I will continue with this novel in my library so when I forget about this fic content I can do.e back to read and see if author raised the quality at that time I will decide if I change my rating

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C_wright171717
C_wright171717Lv12

dude u hate every book u read on here. click my face and u can see all my posts. thats what I'm did to u. every post is u bashing an author for something u wouldn't do. let me get a link to some of ur books

daoist_buttlover
daoist_buttloverLv2

Not really a logical comparison. You think just because an author wrote a book they're better than everyone else? bad writing is bad writing. some books are hidden gems, and some just suck. its the reality of sites like this

C_wright171717:dude u hate every book u read on here. click my face and u can see all my posts. thats what I'm did to u. every post is u bashing an author for something u wouldn't do. let me get a link to some of ur books
baniel_stone
baniel_stoneLv4

critical but no one learns from compliments

Kenrio
KenrioLv11

yeah,it's not like I hate this fic,it's just that my expecatation was really to high. I love these fic that focus on some type mc that have a more leisure job so when the start is not what I was expecting it was a huge let down coupled with the other mistake male me super disappointed. at least I know when I come here again 3 months later I know what to expect in the being and will be able to tolerate and enjoy more. this fic make me remember how high my expectations for cyberpunk was,and while not bad compared to many other games I played this year, is was the worst have all the expectation going down

daoist_buttlover:Not really a logical comparison. You think just because an author wrote a book they're better than everyone else? bad writing is bad writing. some books are hidden gems, and some just suck. its the reality of sites like this
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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv12

I do love dungeon master novels and am happy you chose the genre that said either people are stupid or reading the wrong novel cause this doesnt even deserve 1 star. Mc is naive, extremely stupid to the point its cringe, and a massive hypocrite. Could barely go past chapter 3. 1. How has he never injured himself in the cave hes visited for years. 2. His love for an orphanage that took him in because its the literal job of the orphanage is cringe and to the point of fanatic that its unrealistic, sure maybe they were super nice but its their job. ok sure this isnt that bad but its annoying and cringe as heck to see him beg for some money and cry like a baby cause he apparently "needs to support his orphanage" which is literally government funded and he should be paying for food and rent which is a much better excuse cause thats not how a normal person would react or pay their debt its stupid. 3. Grammar is eh 4. Mc is hypocrite, kills wolfs, sees wolf leader has kid, so kills their enemies to protect wolf leader. why? because he has a kid?!?! One, the wolf leader and you were enemies until the second you saw they had a kid and the enemies you kill have kids also you oaf and you have no relation to either party, completely forced by author. 5. I hate harems, but i wont let that affect my review because thats a category not a writing flaw. However why do you people need to ruin novels with dungeon masters and recruiting so much, if you want a harem thats fine, but not almost every single monster recruited needs to be a girl for the sake of harem, throw some guys in that arent antagonists or extras. For those who love harems, thats your choice but i will say its better to not put a harem in a novel as a majority of the webnovel readerbase hates anything harem related and most of those who read harems still read books without harems so if you want more readers dont do harem or little sisters. Little sisters makes 90% of readers drop a novel just seeing any words that state mc has a little sister those that stay just hope she dies so they can read in peace. 6. theres more but im too lazy.

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