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SHADOWBLADE
SHADOWBLADELv133yr
2021-11-03 18:29

I had expected something good after author's last novel 'stealing heroine' one but this novel was a dissapointment i won't say anything about bad grammar but novel was full of lines trying to evoke a comedic atmosphere though it wasn't able to do it. and there are other things but i ain't gonna type anymore

Farming Inside The Dungeon (The legend of farm-style dungeon)

Rysangel
4.0
116 Chs

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Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Writing quality is good. The start and concept was interesting. sadly the mc and the story developement ruins it. Overfriendly i have to pay back social debts kind of mc. Add to that bad battles. Story might be interesting for people with a lighter and younger taste or for children

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Kenrio
KenrioLv11

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Konoyaro789
Konoyaro789Lv1

A nice concept about farming. Hope to see the dungeon developed like PvZ. Until ch 19, there was still not much farming, but really like how author start the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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prasanna10
prasanna10Lv15

Great and funny story There are farming stories there are dungeon master stories but this 2 in 1 package is what we need and deserve Do keep it up and do continue to update chapters regularly !!!

3yr
Kevinsan3141
Kevinsan3141Lv10

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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv12

I do love dungeon master novels and am happy you chose the genre that said either people are stupid or reading the wrong novel cause this doesnt even deserve 1 star. Mc is naive, extremely stupid to the point its cringe, and a massive hypocrite. Could barely go past chapter 3. 1. How has he never injured himself in the cave hes visited for years. 2. His love for an orphanage that took him in because its the literal job of the orphanage is cringe and to the point of fanatic that its unrealistic, sure maybe they were super nice but its their job. ok sure this isnt that bad but its annoying and cringe as heck to see him beg for some money and cry like a baby cause he apparently "needs to support his orphanage" which is literally government funded and he should be paying for food and rent which is a much better excuse cause thats not how a normal person would react or pay their debt its stupid. 3. Grammar is eh 4. Mc is hypocrite, kills wolfs, sees wolf leader has kid, so kills their enemies to protect wolf leader. why? because he has a kid?!?! One, the wolf leader and you were enemies until the second you saw they had a kid and the enemies you kill have kids also you oaf and you have no relation to either party, completely forced by author. 5. I hate harems, but i wont let that affect my review because thats a category not a writing flaw. However why do you people need to ruin novels with dungeon masters and recruiting so much, if you want a harem thats fine, but not almost every single monster recruited needs to be a girl for the sake of harem, throw some guys in that arent antagonists or extras. For those who love harems, thats your choice but i will say its better to not put a harem in a novel as a majority of the webnovel readerbase hates anything harem related and most of those who read harems still read books without harems so if you want more readers dont do harem or little sisters. Little sisters makes 90% of readers drop a novel just seeing any words that state mc has a little sister those that stay just hope she dies so they can read in peace. 6. theres more but im too lazy.

3yr
Damar_0178
Damar_0178Lv1

We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon, We need talking dragon 😆😆😆😆

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hersheytemple
hersheytempleLv14

only read about 24 chapters so far as of this review but idk man I've thought about dropping this story a few times now, story itself is pretty good, nothing too amazing but a good read with deferent pacing. My real problem with it is that yes it has the stupid obvious plot armor that we all have come to expect from the novels on this site but what's really getting to me is that not only does author introduce language specific terms from a handful of languages like chaebol (Korean) and nii (Japanese) among a few others, grammar is just as all over the place. wish author would just stick to one or two languages and focus on Grammer, I'm gonna be surprised if I make it to ch.100 lol My advice to author really is to reduce the amount of languages and focus on Grammer

3yr
Paladium
PaladiumLv6

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