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2022-04-23 19:48

The story seems nice and interesting however the grammar is what made me give up on this story. Just by reading the first chapter you notice the amount of basic mistakes the author makes, which of course is unacceptable for a novel in English. If you’re keen on reading this story because of the description, you should read the first chapter and decide for yourself whether you want to continue reading it!

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Basically_God
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... The author isn't an native English writer, though? Doesn't (by your own train of logic) that make it completely acceptable?

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I decided to write a review after reading 100 chapters. I feel like I'm reading a manga with only Buggy as the protagonist. It didn't even feel like I was reading a novel where the protagonist dies and goes to another world. Whether it's the actions of the protagonist or the internal plot, including all the characters in this novel. Everything the author does is the same, they are not alive at all, they are just manga characters. Initially, I thought Buggy's character would gradually grow. with the various experiences Buggy encountered along the way It gradually changes his mind that this world is not the world in the manga he used to read or in the anime he used to watch. But this is the real world with pirates. The naval force and the cruel world government own this planet. I've read up to 100 chapters. I don't see Buggy growing at all. <I don't know if it will grow later because I decided to write a review and stop reading> Having said that, in this part, the Chinese novelist can do better than the author of this story. The author of this novel even thought it was a fictional world, making Buggy's growth unclear. But if he were a Chinese novelist, he would have made Buggy understand for a long time that this world really exists and not the world in the manga. Writing Quality - 2 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 3 total - 3 P.S. I use google translate to write a review. I hope you read and understand what I want to convey.

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