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sareshuma
sareshumaLv43yr
2021-09-10 12:52

The grammar is absolutely horrible. It's broken english, and when I say broken, I mean utterly incomprehensible. They didn't even bother to capitalize a singular I. I'm giving the benefit of the doubt here since updates seem to be very consistent so far in hopes that this story drastically improves in the future. For the author, if you chance upon this, please either consider at least running your chapter/page through a grammar checker, or hire an editor. It will improve your quality of work significantly.

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Capt_mermain1
Capt_mermain1Author

I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support

sareshuma
sareshumaLv4

Thank you very much. I did not realize you were not a native speaker, and came off harsher than I should have. I apologize for that. I look forward to your improvements, since your story is right up my alley :)

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
FACE_IS_LAUGHING
FACE_IS_LAUGHINGLv2

Before you read the novel read first the author's sypnopsis and you will understand. Some of them don't use third party app to correct their sentence, not fluent in composing english sentences or just mtl which is copy paste in other site. Just enjoy the fanfic of this guy.

Chris_Matte
Chris_MatteLv4

is buggy going to see bellemere b4 goes grandline ????

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Redzeth
RedzethLv14

The best advice I can give you is to go to google, make an account and use their document app. It has grammer checks in place, when you are done writing you can copy paste it to webnovel.

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
sudiotaku
sudiotakuLv12

No

Chris_Matte:is buggy going to see bellemere b4 goes grandline ????
LittleDemon47
LittleDemon47Lv4

hey author, the story is not getting the attention it deserves due to grammar mistakes in the beginning, how about i proofread for you

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
itrywriting
itrywritingLv1

author dont feel bad, I can comprehend ever sentence. You can download grammarly on your laptop or phone and it will fix most mistakes. its free

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Moon_Winchester
Moon_WinchesterLv15

The broken english is like baby language so it's easy to understand.

Blackghost3
Blackghost3Lv15

give me next chapter! I need my vitality boost!! give me my fluffies!!!!

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Blackghost3
Blackghost3Lv15

can you at least upgrade the chapters from four to five please? thank you... :3

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Blackghost3
Blackghost3Lv15

I need more than four chapters a week!

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
ShodaiKokyu
ShodaiKokyuLv13

I've soon worse, and surprisingly like 15 people give it 5 star review. When i tried to read it, not only the grammar is horrible, the story is really reallyy average, like there's nothing special or unique about it.

sareshuma:Thank you very much. I did not realize you were not a native speaker, and came off harsher than I should have. I apologize for that. I look forward to your improvements, since your story is right up my alley :)
Daoistrov1RL
Daoistrov1RLLv1

Hi! Do you have discord or IG?

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14

Hey. I was wondering if you plan to start a new story now that your fairy tail fic is done.

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14

Any plans for a new story?

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
luckyroo
luckyrooLv4

The fanfic has gotten lot better, so can you take your comment back? delete it

DaoistdhbtrD
DaoistdhbtrDLv1

I'm posting a TV Tropes page for this post, my English is not very good and my grammar is terrible, so please help me, I'm asking for all possible assistance

Melshan
MelshanLv7

Harem?

Capt_mermain1:I will try to improve it, as I am still learning english too. Thank you for your support
Basically_God
Basically_GodLv12

Unfortunately this doesn't even work anymore as they completely gutted google docs (at least free version) to the point it's more reliable to just type it into the google search bar XD

Redzeth:The best advice I can give you is to go to google, make an account and use their document app. It has grammer checks in place, when you are done writing you can copy paste it to webnovel.
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