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armonii_armyLv12yr
2023-02-07 00:22

I decided to write a review after reading 100 chapters. I feel like I'm reading a manga with only Buggy as the protagonist. It didn't even feel like I was reading a novel where the protagonist dies and goes to another world. Whether it's the actions of the protagonist or the internal plot, including all the characters in this novel. Everything the author does is the same, they are not alive at all, they are just manga characters. Initially, I thought Buggy's character would gradually grow. with the various experiences Buggy encountered along the way It gradually changes his mind that this world is not the world in the manga he used to read or in the anime he used to watch. But this is the real world with pirates. The naval force and the cruel world government own this planet. I've read up to 100 chapters. I don't see Buggy growing at all. <I don't know if it will grow later because I decided to write a review and stop reading> Having said that, in this part, the Chinese novelist can do better than the author of this story. The author of this novel even thought it was a fictional world, making Buggy's growth unclear. But if he were a Chinese novelist, he would have made Buggy understand for a long time that this world really exists and not the world in the manga. Writing Quality - 2 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 3 World Background - 3 total - 3 P.S. I use google translate to write a review. I hope you read and understand what I want to convey.

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Adict
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I feel an inmense amount of pity for those blind people that foolishly follow the teachings of those blasphemous devil followers of the God Usopp or Buggy the clown. The only true GAWD of One Piece is the mighty Con D. Oriano !!!

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sareshuma
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The grammar is absolutely horrible. It's broken english, and when I say broken, I mean utterly incomprehensible. They didn't even bother to capitalize a singular I. I'm giving the benefit of the doubt here since updates seem to be very consistent so far in hopes that this story drastically improves in the future. For the author, if you chance upon this, please either consider at least running your chapter/page through a grammar checker, or hire an editor. It will improve your quality of work significantly.

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Herohero
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a good fanfic on Messi (baggy) from the world of One Piece with an interesting background story . But unlike the original, he doesn't take advantage of an invisible and powerful plot armor that protects him lol😂😂. anyway this a good fanfic with interesting fighting with a mc who is not arrogant and worker👍. so if you are looking for a reincarnation fanfic without cheating and too without much complication with a morally decent Mc and work mc who does not let himself be walked on, I advise you to read it😁(Google translate)

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soubhik05
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Buggy has huge potential tial As a character But the story is too slow and too early from the canon At this rate the author will run out of things to write if he keeps stretching Things out So best outcome is to do some time skips and training arcs and move things closer to canon or canon itself This way the true potential Of the story will be realised Speaking from prior experience from many great one piece Fanfics which were dropped midway Another thing author, people are not interested In seeing how mc interacts with some no name of but how he interacts with the main characters of one piece such as yonkos straw hats marines etc. those characters which we have hears about and know of. I have read many fanfics where author often change the entire story by introducing too many original ideas Which kind of destroys the fanfic Whether the story is good or not is secondary But the primary focus should always be on sticking to the orignal content of the canon so readers can relate to it Anyways bro so far good job, but please increase the pace because it’s Getting boring I am not here to see my character struggle with some no names pirates when he could train at some island like luffy did I am okay with him not being a genius as luffy and master everything in two years he can take ten years to do the same As he has 20 years left before canon starts 👍👍

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WoofWoof
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cannot differentiate verb and noun, past tense, prepositions, the grammar is unbearable .

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Little_Sapling
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I'm giving it an ultra low rating, because of two things. The first being grammar, in that it is nonexistent in this author's eyes and the second being that for some ungodly reason this has a 4.7 rating at this moment. The only thing this story has going for it is chapter count, text structure and proper use of punctuation marks. At first glance, it looks amazing, but it's just terribly written, the characters have no proper descriptions nor backgrounds, the plot progression is still somewhat okay and the world background is okay. Solid 3 out of 5

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SimpleReaderPassin
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Honestly I was hesitating to read this since i dont like Buggy but i eventually tried it and it blew my mind.First the story starts 1 year before the Great Pirate era started his journey 3 years later=No stealing waifus like Nami,Robin and other canon characters which i absolutely hate in other fics.Really creative in choosing crewmates and extremely great dev of story.The grammer is the only bad thing at the start but I absolutely recommend it

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Xerxes717
Xerxes717Lv14

Eh.... its alright i guess...................................................................................................................

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