ShodaiKokyu

Peak in high school guy

Isn't it normal for some guy on the street to be shirtless when it's summer in the western?Why is he acting so surprised by something common. No don't focus on the summer part that's not my point

NVM next chapter solidify my decision to drop this fic, i can't stand this "girls beating mc"(yet mc is the one called unreasonable) troupe anymore, who tf created this troupe

TF

So by your logic if he's a thief before he got the system, noone know about him being a thief nor he ever get caughr. If so he shouldn't get the thief title, right? you're not just slow, you're a fkin snail

Can't y'all author stop doing this kind of thing. This is not the anime, noone is amused reading the mc treated as unreasonable piece of shit when these girls don't even know something called privacy, like common bruh it's 2025 noone into this thing anymore.

Nawaki just blow up to death

OMG Why is he telling everybody that curious, it's not like he owes Eve anything.

Alright imma be honest with you, the plot progression is really good in this fanfic. The Superman part is absolutely unnecessary tho, even if you want the Superman thing you can just give him the basic tho. No need for fancy shape shifting, ghost phasing, godlike power. In later chapter, Ancient One taught him to be a sorcerer, like you can just keep that part without him being a Superman and he's already almost untouchable at the earlier MCU part, don't forget that he also created the Super Soldier Serum. Now i ask you again, was the Superman part really necessary at this point? Overall great story, if we ignore the Superman part. I like how aggresive Tony Stark is in this fanfic.