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2023-04-16 09:31

this is just trash, i kept feeling frustrated.

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GLimmortalV
GLimmortalVLv2

Read till 70 you'll find it interesting

ChaosZLv15

Then at 270 when he is crippled you want to drop again

GLimmortalV:Read till 70 you'll find it interesting
LazyBlackLv4

How many times does he become crippled? I don't know why some writers really like to cripple the main character

ChaosZ:Then at 270 when he is crippled you want to drop again
ChaosZLv15

Like 1 more time but it’s pretty major, but it’s not bad and was pretty understandable, but imo everything before somewhere in the 1000s could’v been left out and it started from there with some obvious changes and it would’ve been a better story

LazyBlack:How many times does he become crippled? I don't know why some writers really like to cripple the main character
Legendary_Gear5Lv13

Then again at chapter 950 when he’s crippled his eyes.

ChaosZ:Then at 270 when he is crippled you want to drop again
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250 chapters in Have to say the novel is unique for the a cultivation novel and that the author has put a good amount of thought into the plot for the story. The first 50 chapters are good but at the same time rough they serve a important part to the story but reading the perspective of a mc thats just getting abused the whole time did for me get a bit annoying and felt like it was going on for to long. after that for around 100 chapters story was pretty good and can say I enjoyed what I read, But as I started closer to around the 200 chapter mark I started disliking things with the plot more and more having to do with the mc. Mc cultivation progress is moving at a snails pace, he keeps getting stronger with being able to cross more realms to fight others but his actual cultivation grade hardly changes. He starts training in multiple area's before really ever mastering what he was already working on specially when he decideds to train in very unconventional paths like duel weilding spears, halberts and glaives. Took the mc hundreds of years to fully accept his relationship with his first wife. He acts coldly to someone that tells him they have been waiting for him for hundreds of millions of years and that you are there life partner. But yet he sits in the wrong seat in hall and suddenly decides he needs to take responsibility for a girl just a chapter earlier he was deciding on to take revenge on there clan or not like tf? Also author if you see this you should add a introduction chapter or in the summary of the novel explaining cultivation ranks I still don't know them. Saw comments about you saying just go to a wiki of rise rising and risen to see the stages in order but I couldn't find anything going over cultivation ranks,there was hardly any information posted on the wiki.

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