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Ynohtna
YnohtnaLv103yr
2021-12-18 10:47

*Spoiler* Pathetic. I just want to vent, at first I enjoyed the story real good and thankful that I found this work. But now the story development became all about making the Ryu(MC) suffer. He suffered all kinds of pain, whether it's psychological, physical, emotional etc. and now the very reason he even committed suicide, that reason where his hope came from, why he gambled his life while not knowing if he'll be qualified with that Sky God Inheritance in his first life and several more who knows how many else he got. His effort was all for a naught because for the sake of story and characters development, nerfed–he became a cultivation cripple and as a bonus his edge on prized bone structure which boasted godly cultivation speed was thrashed to slow down. In the end, I'll never drop reading, maybe I was just fed up after binge reading his continuous suffering. Aside from that, I'll recommend you to read this and following his suffering too.

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BattleGodWodan
BattleGodWodanLv14

When does his cultivation get fixed? Is the chapter already out? Because I am about to drop, if it takes longer than 40 Chapters

Saint_Locus
Saint_LocusLv3

it takes 60 chaps, rome wasnt built in a day my man, this foundation the authors set is actually really good just read.

BattleGodWodan:When does his cultivation get fixed? Is the chapter already out? Because I am about to drop, if it takes longer than 40 Chapters
imjustthtguy
imjustthtguyLv4

60!is way to long to cripple a man you can progress a story without cripple your MC mupltiple times and while you say it sets up the story in all honesty it just show me that the author couldn’t write progress in a better way so he cripples the Mc to progress especially if it’s a couple hundred pages in

Saint_Locus:it takes 60 chaps, rome wasnt built in a day my man, this foundation the authors set is actually really good just read.
Fayyaad_Yusuf
Fayyaad_YusufLv4

I wonder if you'd recognize Ryu if you see him now

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TheAmbrosius
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_Frost_
_Frost_Lv13

250 chapters in Have to say the novel is unique for the a cultivation novel and that the author has put a good amount of thought into the plot for the story. The first 50 chapters are good but at the same time rough they serve a important part to the story but reading the perspective of a mc thats just getting abused the whole time did for me get a bit annoying and felt like it was going on for to long. after that for around 100 chapters story was pretty good and can say I enjoyed what I read, But as I started closer to around the 200 chapter mark I started disliking things with the plot more and more having to do with the mc. Mc cultivation progress is moving at a snails pace, he keeps getting stronger with being able to cross more realms to fight others but his actual cultivation grade hardly changes. He starts training in multiple area's before really ever mastering what he was already working on specially when he decideds to train in very unconventional paths like duel weilding spears, halberts and glaives. Took the mc hundreds of years to fully accept his relationship with his first wife. He acts coldly to someone that tells him they have been waiting for him for hundreds of millions of years and that you are there life partner. But yet he sits in the wrong seat in hall and suddenly decides he needs to take responsibility for a girl just a chapter earlier he was deciding on to take revenge on there clan or not like tf? Also author if you see this you should add a introduction chapter or in the summary of the novel explaining cultivation ranks I still don't know them. Saw comments about you saying just go to a wiki of rise rising and risen to see the stages in order but I couldn't find anything going over cultivation ranks,there was hardly any information posted on the wiki.

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