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paygeeLv152yr
2022-02-17 16:11

I have read upto chapter 265. I can honestly say i got tired of keeping track of his cultivation issues. MC has 4 bloodlines, three kinds of power system, uses multiple type of weapons (which also needs individual cultivation for each). That in itself is already a handful but, you are still trying to make him do other kinds of cultivation. while still keeping his power realms the same even though he can fight people with levels way above him. To top it all off you introduced the MC as someone very smart like being able to figure out peoples motives, playing with people or finding out clues to lost and forgotten realms/ruins from folklore. BUT he keeps making mistakes that are common sense. his accumulated age is more than a thousand years Sir author, I can tell you have thought alot about this novel given how detailed it is and how you try to explain everything. But its getting too toxic.

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NotOG
NotOGLv14

i dropped it when the MC got crippled.. did he got healed ( chapter ? ) or still crippled?

Ice_Sovereign
Ice_SovereignLv12

What chapter is that

NotOG:i dropped it when the MC got crippled.. did he got healed ( chapter ? ) or still crippled?
Daniel_Kalil
Daniel_KalilLv14

So you probably did not read past 4 chapters after he "got crippled". Although i did not like it too, it made sense because a few chapters later after he failed his Spirit Severing, we discovered the Truth about his Chaotic Silk Meridians, so not only is he not a cripple, he became even stronger after his failed severing.

NotOG:i dropped it when the MC got crippled.. did he got healed ( chapter ? ) or still crippled?
Daniel_Kalil
Daniel_KalilLv14

its not true, read the comment i made here, i explained

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NotOG
NotOGLv14

ohh that's great.. i was really really annoyed about him getting crippled time and time again so i stopped reading it. but well .can you tell me wich chapter he failed his severing cus i forgot

Daniel_Kalil:So you probably did not read past 4 chapters after he "got crippled". Although i did not like it too, it made sense because a few chapters later after he failed his Spirit Severing, we discovered the Truth about his Chaotic Silk Meridians, so not only is he not a cripple, he became even stronger after his failed severing.
Daniel_Kalil
Daniel_KalilLv14

he failed his severing in chapters 253-254, and discovered the secrets of his meridians around 260 iirc, but its close from when he failed.

NotOG:ohh that's great.. i was really really annoyed about him getting crippled time and time again so i stopped reading it. but well .can you tell me wich chapter he failed his severing cus i forgot
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

Ok Cool

Daniel_Kalil:its not true, read the comment i made here, i explained
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_Frost_
_Frost_Lv13

250 chapters in Have to say the novel is unique for the a cultivation novel and that the author has put a good amount of thought into the plot for the story. The first 50 chapters are good but at the same time rough they serve a important part to the story but reading the perspective of a mc thats just getting abused the whole time did for me get a bit annoying and felt like it was going on for to long. after that for around 100 chapters story was pretty good and can say I enjoyed what I read, But as I started closer to around the 200 chapter mark I started disliking things with the plot more and more having to do with the mc. Mc cultivation progress is moving at a snails pace, he keeps getting stronger with being able to cross more realms to fight others but his actual cultivation grade hardly changes. He starts training in multiple area's before really ever mastering what he was already working on specially when he decideds to train in very unconventional paths like duel weilding spears, halberts and glaives. Took the mc hundreds of years to fully accept his relationship with his first wife. He acts coldly to someone that tells him they have been waiting for him for hundreds of millions of years and that you are there life partner. But yet he sits in the wrong seat in hall and suddenly decides he needs to take responsibility for a girl just a chapter earlier he was deciding on to take revenge on there clan or not like tf? Also author if you see this you should add a introduction chapter or in the summary of the novel explaining cultivation ranks I still don't know them. Saw comments about you saying just go to a wiki of rise rising and risen to see the stages in order but I couldn't find anything going over cultivation ranks,there was hardly any information posted on the wiki.

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