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OwlerLv41yr
2023-10-04 23:22

This Fan-Fic destroyed all other Fan-Fics/novels/books for me; everything else just pales in comparison. Let me start with what I think are the best parts of this fanfic: 1- MC 2- Secondary Characters 3- Story Development 4- Character Development 5- Writing Quality 6- Story In General 7- Harry potter Universe 8- Logical Story Development 9- Interesting Interactions 10- No Fillers 11- Thrilling Story (I Can't Stress This ENOUGH) 12- A Well Thought of Alternate Universe(World Background) ... Actually, the list goes on and on. Now, for what I think, people think is bad in this FanFic. (some of them are part of why it's my favorite) I'll try to not spoil anything : 1- MC Starts supper edgy due to certain logical reasons 2- there's no daily upload 3- You can't help but binge read till 5am in the morning if there are a lot of chapters 4- I literally had to think for 4 min straight to bring up the previous 3 arguments... that's how good the Book is. When I'm trying to discover a book to read, I usually start by reading the lowest rating reviews. Which is why I'm giving this a 1 star. A 1 star to show my respect to this amazing masterpiece. And a word to the author: Keep making other books pale in comparison.

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Tante_HildaLv2

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TJisReadingLv13

Well it worked cuz i as well don’t read 5 star reviews so here i am n ill give it a try

Carlos_2757Lv3

gamabunda4873Lv5

... hows it ...haha

TJisReading:Well it worked cuz i as well don’t read 5 star reviews so here i am n ill give it a try
SimpleReaderPassinLv4

yup. I always read the 3 star or below review first. 5 star or 4 star are usually bots with the same word of this is a great novel or other such

WeavingSpiderLv6

Actual against reading this novel reasons:-mc goes to school and somehow it gets never mentioned in which year he is after a while-30ish filler chapter about quidditch- every odd chapter there will be "the mc cant possibly do that, oh he actually did that" chapters-the story is very predictable (not necessarily a bad thing)-all girls fall in love in one way or the other with alex-every odd chapter feels too short with all that said, i aint saying it is a bad fanfic, i am just pointing out some flaws.

TaitirukLv14

giving the author a 1 star hurts the overall rating of the fic, so instead you should give a 3-4 star. people still read them and it's good for the author

HellBoyMCLv13

Well I myself mostly read 1 star reviews cuz most 5 stars ones are either bots or just reviews which makes no sense.I want to ask a question though does MC edgy personality change cuz maybe for first time traders edgy mc will look good but for me after reading so many wannabe villains and edgy mc I just want a normal mc who is smart in his decision making.Honestly now I long for a good personality mc with good decision making skills which honestly is even rarer than most people here finding girlfriends 💀

Mister_RobotLv4

I trust 1 star rating. 5 star ratings are mostly given by bots. gonna check it

OwlerLv4

Obviously I don't wanna spoil anything, but to answer your question, yes. Character development, logical thinking/ decisions, etc... The edgy part is due to circumstances that happened in the first few chapters. I highly recommend you try it.

HellBoyMC:Well I myself mostly read 1 star reviews cuz most 5 stars ones are either bots or just reviews which makes no sense.I want to ask a question though does MC edgy personality change cuz maybe for first time traders edgy mc will look good but for me after reading so many wannabe villains and edgy mc I just want a normal mc who is smart in his decision making.Honestly now I long for a good personality mc with good decision making skills which honestly is even rarer than most people here finding girlfriends 💀
HellBoyMCLv13

Thanks for the info bro.I plan on binge reading it today since I have free time today.

Owler:Obviously I don't wanna spoil anything, but to answer your question, yes. Character development, logical thinking/ decisions, etc... The edgy part is due to circumstances that happened in the first few chapters. I highly recommend you try it.
Word7Lv11

you are smart my dude lol I'ma be doing this too

Emibm2468Lv4

dude what i do to have a grasp of what people like and dislike is that i serch for 1 star reviews. then i look for more moderate reviews. after i get both sides i completely ignore everything but the reviews that are more articulated. finaly i can make a judgment on if reading it or not. I was incredibly surprised to find a lot of stories have abismal ratings just becaue (and i quote) “the mc is beta trash”

The_Dark_HydraxLv4

You've convinced me

Okami9Lv3

You got pinned lol

ystabubbels12Lv14

I found your story on YouTube

dylan_pyleLv14

shame the is romance and other restraints and the is a system

OwlerLv4

MY story? xD

ystabubbels12:I found your story on YouTube
Bryan_Hernandez_2254Lv1

hey man the history have harem

Owler:MY story? xD
solo_leveling_godLv4

fid he drop it ??

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Honest Review time. If you want, you can skip the detailed criteria and just read the general evaluation and conclusion. I usually go easy on fanfic and give it 4 or 5 stars unless there's some major or annoying problem that I can't let go, but that's not the case with this fic. I'm giving it a 2,4 because I'm evaluating it mainly on the criteria I use for an original novel and not for a fic. As an original novel, I would give it 3.5 but this fic lost stars for failing in some points as a fanfic. The reason for this is that in addition to being a top-ranked fic, the author actually earns more than a thousand dollars from it on Patreon, charging much more per advanced chapter than an original novel charges per chapter. General Rating:It's an interesting story that's worth reading, but nothing very special., but it's heavily AU to the point where a simple change of name of some locations, spells and characters would make this a generic original novel that begins in an academy and system setting. I don't highly recommend it for those who hope to read a good fic about Harry Potter because they love the original work. I recommend readers start this fic thinking of it as an original novel rather than a fanfic. As an original novel this is an average story, but when placed among fanfics this becomes a top work in the webnovel where chapter releases need to be frequent and this is a great challenge for amateur authors who write for pleasure or as a hobby. Webnovel criteria: 1- Writing Quality - 3 stars: The writing quality is good, at the level of a good author, but there are some problems that anyone who read the entire fic at once notices and that's why I'm giving 3 stars in this category. It is worth mentioning that the author does not even correct errors such as a wrong name even when readers point it out. Examples are like when the MC was undercover and introduced himself to a character using a fake name, but that character called him by his real name, a skill that suddenly changed its name, another skill that should have been the next one to be unlocked in the class progression but it seems like it was simply forgotten as the MC didn't even mention the reason for never picking it up, and finally but most importantly the system became more and more irrelevant as the fic progressed. The system is still there, but it never gets screen time other than giving missions and rewards, and although it still helps the MC progress in some ways, this progression is rarely shown, the system status screen simply no longer appears in the fic. 2- Stability of Updates - 2 stars: It's not very stable, the fic has already gone through long hiatus, the chapters are currently released every two or three days and although it's very good for a fanfic, it's not the case for what it is almost an original novel where the author profits from it. 3- Story Development - 3 stars: It's average, the MC being a thief in a world where everyone is a wizard was interesting, but then ninjas and warriors were added and suddenly the MC is no longer special, just better than the rest, that added some more interesting fights but it took away what was special about MC as the author didn't do a good job of differentiating the Arcane Thief class from a Thief in a generic fantasy setting. As it is a completely AU scenario, there is no way to evaluate how well the author portrayed the events in relation to the original work since nothing more than names, some basic mechanics and some locations follow the original HP so I am once again evaluating it as an original novel and disregarding it. how well the author used the source material to write his fic. 4- Character Design - 1 star: To be honest, in an original novel I would give something like 3 stars since all the heroines are interesting and well written, but the rest of the characters are not developed and totally forgettable. I'm giving this one star because not even striking and easy-to-use characters like Snape, McGonagall and Dumbledore were relegated to characters with no presence who barely appear, so in addition to taking off 2 stars because only the MC and Heroines have presence, I'm taking more two for failing as a fanfic to use even something basic from the original material. 5- World Background - 3 stars: It is a generic fantasy setting where we have the world of darkness, the world of light and the weaker human world in between. In the human world we have Atlantis, an advanced and reclusive magical civilization that lost much of its past heritage due to disaster. Nothing bad, but nothing original here. Conclusion: This is less of a fic and more of a generic original novel that is interesting and worth reading, but would never top the rankings when competing with other original novels. When compared to other fics instead of original novels, this one ends up standing out.

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