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2021-08-19 08:53

-> the grammar could be better, but it's readable. story development is rushed and lacks detail. if you want the naruto story with a lot of comedy, little detail and little depth in the plot, this is for you.

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Joao132135
Joao132135Author

quite right

Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

hey how about adding noharem tag and no early romance too while you are at it.

Joao132135:quite right
Joao132135
Joao132135Author

well i will change some tags latter but for now it will stay like that...

Leon_Luis_:hey how about adding noharem tag and no early romance too while you are at it.
sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

so its not harem?

Joao132135:well i will change some tags latter but for now it will stay like that...
catlava
catlavaLv2

can you review my story please?

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