I don't find any default except the fact that at the beginning it's a slow slow pace story but the clever author ask us about what to change we respond to him and he has started to shift his writing way. the best fic I have read on this platform because it so detailed so well written that you can think you read an original fiction and not a "fanfiction". even if my review don't sell this story to you I think you should try to read this. sorry for the grammar and the mistakes I'm not native.

Greetings, future readers Now that I got on the newest chapter, I thought I can give my opinion about this story. I hope I can encourage more people to try this novel, which may be an interesting and entertaining activity. As you can tell from reaching these last number of chapters, I really enjoyed this reading experience. I'll have my description and analysis of this novel in this screenshot. At last, thank you very much for reading such an extensive ode to our beloved novel :)) And I hope you can also embark in the story of the "Saharan Successor". King regards, StoiKism

First I will take this opportunity to thank any reader who clicked on my story and checked my “shameless” self reviewing and the other guys. This story of mine is centered on the idea of “what if another person took the spotlight of the story and turned out to be the protagonist.’ and so I decided to formulate my ideas for this story. Mathias, a down to earth guy, living alone and working hard to maintain himself. This is my MC, someone that many might relate to, or find interesting as a character, like most humans he has his good sides and bad sides, but they are balancing out in an interesting fashion. The main focus of the story is the MC growth as a person and his character, along with the development of the game ‘Satisfy’ that reaches on high grounds when it comes to having world building. Following my already established storytelling style, my characters will feel alive, even from the most insignificant guard NPC, to the most important characters. The dialogues, interaction and every single part of what a game (VRMMO should be) you will find inside my story. With heavy inspiration from the established works (DnD and so on, I will not add more because of C) Using all these references I will move about and try to interpret those elements in my own unique way. The pacing of the story will be medium to fast-paced. Rating wise, I would comment on my skills as such. Writing quality might be lower at a 4.3-4.5 rating, the rest being solid 4.8-5 points, you just have to read it yourself and prove to me otherwise.

Writing Quality: Most of the time everthing is readable and correct, but sometimes words are not in the right order(IMO) and my head has to correct that. Hence 4.2 Stars Update Stabilty: So far he always uploads a new Chapter every second day, so no problem here. 5 Stars Story Development: The author is pretty good with coming up with his own stuff , so no exact retelling of canon just from a different perspective. Since I have Insider-Info I already have a good idea how the story will progress in the future. 4.8 Stars Character Design : To be honest we weren't introduced to many Character so far, so i'll refrain from making my judgment for now . 5 Stars(temporary till we meet more Characters) World Background: It's a fanfiction playing out in the World of the Novel "Overgeared" , but the author will expand on it with time/later . No problems here. 5 Stars The Author totally didn't force me to make a Review.......

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I'm one of those readers who read the original, I like the original better than this rewrite because the pace of this rewrite is too fast for me, and there is no in-depth relation and world background. maybe in the future will improve, but for now I'm rating this 3,6/5.

a good story, I just didn't like the MC's personality a little, I don't like the MC very much, he helps people a lot without having any interest, just out of kindness and when they're going to reciprocate he's like not wanting to be something in return, it bothers a little, but the MC's personality may change later in the story. being me can change one thing in this story i would make an MC with a more confident personality a little greedy helps people more for something in return. other than that and one of the best stories I've ever read far surpassed the original.

Such an underrated ff and this is a ff of overgeared,the story will be not showing too much of the og characters and only will appear in important events such as the tournament and other stuff.I love the interaction of the characters.JUST READ IT

Most enjoyable ff on this platform. I haven't seen anything better, this deserves more. It's totaly worth time, and I recommend everyone to read it. But you should read overgeared original work if you want to understand this ff. When you know how things work there, then you will place this FF as godly ones.