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Morpheus146
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2021-08-24 08:21

First I will take this opportunity to thank any reader who clicked on my story and checked my “shameless” self reviewing and the other guys. This story of mine is centered on the idea of “what if another person took the spotlight of the story and turned out to be the protagonist.’ and so I decided to formulate my ideas for this story. Mathias, a down to earth guy, living alone and working hard to maintain himself. This is my MC, someone that many might relate to, or find interesting as a character, like most humans he has his good sides and bad sides, but they are balancing out in an interesting fashion. The main focus of the story is the MC growth as a person and his character, along with the development of the game ‘Satisfy’ that reaches on high grounds when it comes to having world building. Following my already established storytelling style, my characters will feel alive, even from the most insignificant guard NPC, to the most important characters. The dialogues, interaction and every single part of what a game (VRMMO should be) you will find inside my story. With heavy inspiration from the established works (DnD and so on, I will not add more because of C) Using all these references I will move about and try to interpret those elements in my own unique way. The pacing of the story will be medium to fast-paced. Rating wise, I would comment on my skills as such. Writing quality might be lower at a 4.3-4.5 rating, the rest being solid 4.8-5 points, you just have to read it yourself and prove to me otherwise.

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ChesterCure
ChesterCureLv4

i just want to ask if he get multiple wives or not. if yes then at most give him 4 woman.

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Ohh, that. Yes, it will be only 2 love interests or 3. (2 in the game) and one IRL.

ChesterCure:i just want to ask if he get multiple wives or not. if yes then at most give him 4 woman.
DaoistLzSFxA
DaoistLzSFxALv4

Hope it will be Yura

Morpheus146:Ohh, that. Yes, it will be only 2 love interests or 3. (2 in the game) and one IRL.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

DaoistLzSFxA:Hope it will be Yura
Invalidddd
InvaliddddLv1

make it harem just make it seems natural not force

Morpheus146:
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Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv3

i just wanna ask why is this not on original is it because you wanted ppl to not have to pay coins to read? or just accident? its fine either way but i wanna know

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Because technically my story enters the category of fiction. I am using the world background of the original story (Overgeared) which instead turns my novel into fiction. If to you it feels like an original, hat's off to me because I did the job well. Ahem, so I don't inflate my meagre ego for no reason, this is the simple answer I didn't place this novel as an original. As the story progresses you will see those characters from the original story (NPC's most of the time).

Radioactive_Noodle:i just wanna ask why is this not on original is it because you wanted ppl to not have to pay coins to read? or just accident? its fine either way but i wanna know
NULL_MONARCH
NULL_MONARCHLv4

author will there be haerm ending or single lead ending if there is hearem ending can you add haerm tag please

Morpheus146:Ohh, that. Yes, it will be only 2 love interests or 3. (2 in the game) and one IRL.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Yea I will don't worry. The story is lateharem (if there even such a tag) lol

NULL_MONARCH:author will there be haerm ending or single lead ending if there is hearem ending can you add haerm tag please
yb48
yb48Lv14

harem is a must in a world with monsters and wars lol :D , and rejecting a girl who likes you is a sin :v

Morpheus146:Yea I will don't worry. The story is lateharem (if there even such a tag) lol
JheyDi
JheyDiLv3

Irene (?) , Jishuka, Yura and Ruby.. Hmmmm... What do you say Author?? .. Hehehe~

Morpheus146:Yea I will don't worry. The story is lateharem (if there even such a tag) lol
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

You will have to read the story to understand. As for those you have listened 1 is excluded from the start (Irene - she is in Eternal Kingdom while Mathias is in Saharan Empire), Yura, you will meet her in the future but their interaction, it remains to be seen. As for Ruby, she is too small and also Korean. Jishuka. Well, there's a candidate right there, and who knows what will happen.

JheyDi:Irene (?) , Jishuka, Yura and Ruby.. Hmmmm... What do you say Author?? .. Hehehe~
lord_dark
lord_darkLv1

Why is there Isekai in Tag? From what I understand Isekai means moving to another world one way or another. I have reached chapter four. I don’t want to put a review until I advance in chapters. I want to know the reason for Tag. It annoys me not knowing why. The story is good so far.

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Isekai means moving to another world, right? Then using a VR tech to enter another world to play, could also be considered Isekai, right? The game is like another world, realistic, which would respect the tag "Isekai" even though it's not a continuous stay there.

lord_dark:Why is there Isekai in Tag? From what I understand Isekai means moving to another world one way or another. I have reached chapter four. I don’t want to put a review until I advance in chapters. I want to know the reason for Tag. It annoys me not knowing why. The story is good so far.
DarkLonginus
DarkLonginusLv3

In the Saharan Empire? I guess he will get a Mercedes for himself lol (Google Translate)

Morpheus146:You will have to read the story to understand. As for those you have listened 1 is excluded from the start (Irene - she is in Eternal Kingdom while Mathias is in Saharan Empire), Yura, you will meet her in the future but their interaction, it remains to be seen. As for Ruby, she is too small and also Korean. Jishuka. Well, there's a candidate right there, and who knows what will happen.
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

It remains to be seen what happens with Mercedes.

DarkLonginus:In the Saharan Empire? I guess he will get a Mercedes for himself lol (Google Translate)
lord_dark
lord_darkLv1

usually I see some of these novels that contain vr, you get a gamer tag or mmorpg or something like that, but this is the first time I see Isekai used like this anyway 15 chapter in, the novel still great

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Well, themes are similar in a sense, so I opted to add this too because of this close similarity, and in a way, my story is one of those "isekais" just that always for a temporary amount before once again dropping in the isekai world. Also, glad to hear you reached chapter 15 and feel that way.

lord_dark:usually I see some of these novels that contain vr, you get a gamer tag or mmorpg or something like that, but this is the first time I see Isekai used like this anyway 15 chapter in, the novel still great
KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv5

you know if i play a game like overgeared Irl(with the most realistic vr like the manwha) I wouldnt really read or hear npc dialogs just skip them all and grind till im max then fight some boss or something

Morpheus146
Morpheus146Author

Heh. Really? How would you get the skills?

KING_IN_YELLOW:you know if i play a game like overgeared Irl(with the most realistic vr like the manwha) I wouldnt really read or hear npc dialogs just skip them all and grind till im max then fight some boss or something
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