First I will take this opportunity to thank any reader who clicked on my story and checked my “shameless” self reviewing and the other guys. This story of mine is centered on the idea of “what if another person took the spotlight of the story and turned out to be the protagonist.’ and so I decided to formulate my ideas for this story. Mathias, a down to earth guy, living alone and working hard to maintain himself. This is my MC, someone that many might relate to, or find interesting as a character, like most humans he has his good sides and bad sides, but they are balancing out in an interesting fashion. The main focus of the story is the MC growth as a person and his character, along with the development of the game ‘Satisfy’ that reaches on high grounds when it comes to having world building. Following my already established storytelling style, my characters will feel alive, even from the most insignificant guard NPC, to the most important characters. The dialogues, interaction and every single part of what a game (VRMMO should be) you will find inside my story. With heavy inspiration from the established works (DnD and so on, I will not add more because of C) Using all these references I will move about and try to interpret those elements in my own unique way. The pacing of the story will be medium to fast-paced. Rating wise, I would comment on my skills as such. Writing quality might be lower at a 4.3-4.5 rating, the rest being solid 4.8-5 points, you just have to read it yourself and prove to me otherwise.
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LIKEBecause technically my story enters the category of fiction. I am using the world background of the original story (Overgeared) which instead turns my novel into fiction. If to you it feels like an original, hat's off to me because I did the job well. Ahem, so I don't inflate my meagre ego for no reason, this is the simple answer I didn't place this novel as an original. As the story progresses you will see those characters from the original story (NPC's most of the time).
You will have to read the story to understand. As for those you have listened 1 is excluded from the start (Irene - she is in Eternal Kingdom while Mathias is in Saharan Empire), Yura, you will meet her in the future but their interaction, it remains to be seen. As for Ruby, she is too small and also Korean. Jishuka. Well, there's a candidate right there, and who knows what will happen.
Isekai means moving to another world, right? Then using a VR tech to enter another world to play, could also be considered Isekai, right? The game is like another world, realistic, which would respect the tag "Isekai" even though it's not a continuous stay there.
In the Saharan Empire? I guess he will get a Mercedes for himself lol (Google Translate)
Well, themes are similar in a sense, so I opted to add this too because of this close similarity, and in a way, my story is one of those "isekais" just that always for a temporary amount before once again dropping in the isekai world. Also, glad to hear you reached chapter 15 and feel that way.