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StoiKism
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2022-03-15 03:28

Greetings, future readers Now that I got on the newest chapter, I thought I can give my opinion about this story. I hope I can encourage more people to try this novel, which may be an interesting and entertaining activity. As you can tell from reaching these last number of chapters, I really enjoyed this reading experience. I'll have my description and analysis of this novel in this screenshot. At last, thank you very much for reading such an extensive ode to our beloved novel :)) And I hope you can also embark in the story of the "Saharan Successor". King regards, StoiKism

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First I will take this opportunity to thank any reader who clicked on my story and checked my “shameless” self reviewing and the other guys. This story of mine is centered on the idea of “what if another person took the spotlight of the story and turned out to be the protagonist.’ and so I decided to formulate my ideas for this story. Mathias, a down to earth guy, living alone and working hard to maintain himself. This is my MC, someone that many might relate to, or find interesting as a character, like most humans he has his good sides and bad sides, but they are balancing out in an interesting fashion. The main focus of the story is the MC growth as a person and his character, along with the development of the game ‘Satisfy’ that reaches on high grounds when it comes to having world building. Following my already established storytelling style, my characters will feel alive, even from the most insignificant guard NPC, to the most important characters. The dialogues, interaction and every single part of what a game (VRMMO should be) you will find inside my story. With heavy inspiration from the established works (DnD and so on, I will not add more because of C) Using all these references I will move about and try to interpret those elements in my own unique way. The pacing of the story will be medium to fast-paced. Rating wise, I would comment on my skills as such. Writing quality might be lower at a 4.3-4.5 rating, the rest being solid 4.8-5 points, you just have to read it yourself and prove to me otherwise.

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