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Tigre_Negro008
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2023-04-12 05:13

The story is something the author didn't put much effort into, it seems like what popped into his head and sounds interesting was written into the story. Protagonist and like a child with his powers, he wants a power that he thinks is cool, he gains power, plays with the new power, then in the next chapter he is already thinking of another power without really mastering what he has. Other than that the characters get strong at such a fast speed that for the missions to have some difficulty a part of their power has to be blocked. Anyway, it's not a story to be taken seriously when reading, if each member of the group keeps to 1 single type of power or advantage and trains for their powers and complements them during missions that need several members, together with a slower development of strength, only then would this story be an interesting read. And the protagonist doesn't seem to have a personality of his own, for me he conveys the idea of ​​a character whose personality is formed from pieces of fictional characters

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Yes... I'm in chapter 7 and from what I understand. The protagonist reading Chinese things created chakra (which originally comes from an alien fruit with the energy of the world) and to top it off martial arts... That in 2 days. Just that and I don't want to keep looking anymore.

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