Welp I feel like the author kinda forces too many things like Mc being and team 7 as a 4 man squad when konoha has use the 3 man cell for years and wouldn't just change it for someone of mcs caliber who is a orphan and has no backing, also would Kakashi really just let his student end up in the bingo book with useless attention when his student used chicory and Kakashi could've perfectly covered it up as him using it, I also feel that the author is too focused on land of iron even forcing the chunky exams to for some reason be there when the Mc actually has options in the land of the leaf like improving Chakra metal for a sword, learning Chakra coating from asuna, kenjutsj from hatake, learn Kakashi anbu sword arts, maybe even get insight from tenten as he trains with her all the time, etc.
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LIKEimporting* no improving
hayate* not hatake
In* not and
no .harem atleast .give him 3girls
that'd be a harem sir
you got ne with 4 members on team 7.
