Item: thrown into naruto (Up for adoption)
Rating: 1
Author: asaade

asaadeLv103yr

2021-10-27 07:28

it looks like prologue has been skipped, what was his background? why did the village need to compensate him? what kind of system is this? an incomplete gamer system? i even see a dungeon in this, using flashback as a way to see his past and how he get his system or what system is that is trash imo

thrown into naruto (Up for adoption)

Idk_wqe2

4.0

59 Chs

Liked by 36 people

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AtikarLv11

Some of this stuff was explained like the compensation is not for him specifically but for the all the orphans who lost their parents in the war and for the system I think that having a very op system just gets boring and when the becomes op I just do not care about their growth cause they are already op. Just them insulting people and causing trouble or going into hiding for some years and reappearing to cause more trouble. But also I get why you do not like some stuff like dungeon and system. I personally do not mind they are just there but I get it. I honestly think the mc is growing at an okay rate maybe a little bit too fast.

3yr

AtikarLv11

In terms of skill

Atikar:Some of this stuff was explained like the compensation is not for him specifically but for the all the orphans who lost their parents in the war and for the system I think that having a very op system just gets boring and when the becomes op I just do not care about their growth cause they are already op. Just them insulting people and causing trouble or going into hiding for some years and reappearing to cause more trouble. But also I get why you do not like some stuff like dungeon and system. I personally do not mind they are just there but I get it. I honestly think the mc is growing at an okay rate maybe a little bit too fast.

3yr

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