Item: thrown into naruto (Up for adoption)
Rating: 2
Author: Dispersium

DispersiumLv43yr

2021-11-10 19:33

this fanfic have some potential but author just to lazy to write decent character background and decent story, in my opinion you better think if this fanfic just story board from author and not the fanfic itself

thrown into naruto (Up for adoption)

Idk_wqe2

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Orange_Car_SlaveLv13

#Translation@Most fanfiction writers write wish fulfillment

Orange_Car_Slave:ほとんどのファンフィクション作家は願いの実現を書きます

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