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ForgottenHope
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2021-08-10 13:45

This is a good story, but it's only the beginning chapters that are good. The story takes a dark and depressing turn on later chapters, you'll see with what am getting at when chapter 10 comes out and that's just the tip of the iceberg. This has its good moments too but it's just the dark and depressing moments far outweigh the good ones. Then again some people might like them. Just warning the peeps because some parts are just really hard to stomach.

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Kurogano
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I agree to some extent, but it definitely isn't all dark and depressing. Certain arcs are dark and depressing for sure, but others aren't.

Kiirii
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the arc with the most dark and drepressing is really around the last chapters.. sob...

Kurogano:I agree to some extent, but it definitely isn't all dark and depressing. Certain arcs are dark and depressing for sure, but others aren't.
Amus_Sama
Amus_SamaLv4

Spoilers please? I kinda wanna know whats dark about it before going into this

Mario_Alonso
Mario_AlonsoLv4

Yeah pls spoilers cause i like to think i love fluff and i cant stomach things like torture or other cruel things. I also kinda hate gore.

Mario_Alonso
Mario_AlonsoLv4

I say this cause a review said that the romace was very wholesome so i am tempted to read but indont wanna suffer later on. :(

Mario_Alonso:Yeah pls spoilers cause i like to think i love fluff and i cant stomach things like torture or other cruel things. I also kinda hate gore.
ForgottenHope
ForgottenHopeLv4

Hmm, you should read chap 10 or up to chap10 before investing in this story. It really sets up your expectations of what to expect when something comes out of this story. She is a supposed different color gardevoir and it tells her story why she is red. But you better be numb when reading chapter 10 because like I said before, some parts are just really hard to stomach. That's all I can say before spoiling too much or spoilling the rest of the story.

Amus_Sama:Spoilers please? I kinda wanna know whats dark about it before going into this
ForgottenHope
ForgottenHopeLv4

I just posted a comment about a spoiler to the other peep just read that one and decide from there.

Mario_Alonso:I say this cause a review said that the romace was very wholesome so i am tempted to read but indont wanna suffer later on. :(
BlackIight
BlackIightLv13

I feel like you could even skip chapter 10, all you have to understand is scarlet had a really f*cked up life.

ForgottenHope:Hmm, you should read chap 10 or up to chap10 before investing in this story. It really sets up your expectations of what to expect when something comes out of this story. She is a supposed different color gardevoir and it tells her story why she is red. But you better be numb when reading chapter 10 because like I said before, some parts are just really hard to stomach. That's all I can say before spoiling too much or spoilling the rest of the story.
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