Didn’t get to give this novel a review before it was moved so here we go. Characters: 5/5 The interactions between the mc and his sister are oddly satisfying to read and feel like actual people. The side characters are also given a very good amount of detail. Overall the characters are written out really well. Story: 5/5 From what I’ve read so far in these couple of chapters the story isn’t some half-baked plot to move the story forward but actually a rather interesting read. Updating Stability: 5/5 The updates are every few days so your not left hanging for a long time waiting for the next. The chapters are also pretty long leaving you satisfied till the next one comes out. Which is honestly kinda refreshing on this site where there are authors that take a month to upload a short chapter. Writing quality: 5/5 There is literally no grammar mistakes that I found throughout my read and like I said previously chapters are pretty long and fleshed out. So anyways this is my review(It’s also my first review ever so be honored XD).

Don't know why you decided to move it here but anyway I'll just give you a 5 star again. You owe me xD. Writing Quality - Excellent, Definitely A 5. Story Development - This is actually so well done. Every character is fleshed out and the pace of the story flows really well. The whole past arc is actually very interesting to read. Character Design- The Whole Volume 1 (7 Chapters is about their past) Two main originals- The Protagonist and the Sister. I mean considering how you've fleshed them out including the other side characters I give a 5. Updating Stability- Every 2-3 days, Pretty good in my opinion since you're also going to start your other fic again. World Background- 5

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I liked everything. The character designs are great. the plot is great. I am happy with everything, the volume of chapters is large - this is also good. I only have 1 question: How often are chapters published? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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I don't mind giving another review since this one is beautifully written. Writing Quality- Nope I couldn't any mistakes whatsoever. A Five Star no doubt. Story Development- I Love This Part. My previous review on his other account was of just 2 chapters but I've read up to the latest now and d*mn it's good. For now, the first volume has ended and it was about their past. With how well developed and fleshed out it is you deserve a 5 or even a 10 if it was possible. Character Design- Every character is human, Has his/her own thought. The protagonist, His sister, the side characters, Every single one of them was written really good. I loved the interactions. Considering all of these characters are originals I give it a 5. As for the characters of MHA or other worlds? I believe you'll do it good considering your I Am Tomura fic. Updating Stability - Every few days, The chapters are usually between 2000-3000 words so a 5. World Background- 5

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DAwg please I'm literally starving for new chapters I need ittttt...... this is the one novel on here that I'm actually excited for, you came in so strong and then put it on hiatus

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