Don't know why you decided to move it here but anyway I'll just give you a 5 star again. You owe me xD. Writing Quality - Excellent, Definitely A 5. Story Development - This is actually so well done. Every character is fleshed out and the pace of the story flows really well. The whole past arc is actually very interesting to read. Character Design- The Whole Volume 1 (7 Chapters is about their past) Two main originals- The Protagonist and the Sister. I mean considering how you've fleshed them out including the other side characters I give a 5. Updating Stability- Every 2-3 days, Pretty good in my opinion since you're also going to start your other fic again. World Background- 5
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