I don't mind giving another review since this one is beautifully written. Writing Quality- Nope I couldn't any mistakes whatsoever. A Five Star no doubt. Story Development- I Love This Part. My previous review on his other account was of just 2 chapters but I've read up to the latest now and d*mn it's good. For now, the first volume has ended and it was about their past. With how well developed and fleshed out it is you deserve a 5 or even a 10 if it was possible. Character Design- Every character is human, Has his/her own thought. The protagonist, His sister, the side characters, Every single one of them was written really good. I loved the interactions. Considering all of these characters are originals I give it a 5. As for the characters of MHA or other worlds? I believe you'll do it good considering your I Am Tomura fic. Updating Stability - Every few days, The chapters are usually between 2000-3000 words so a 5. World Background- 5
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